What does it feel like to be in love?

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 “Hey are you going to Zach’s party tonight?” asked Ashley.

“Umm…” I paused not knowing what to say. “Yes I’m going’’.

“Great! My mum will pick you up at 7:30.”

 As soon as them words came out of my mouth I felt a cold shiver go down my spine because my mum absolutely hated the thought of me going to parties! I was scared that she’d say no then I would look even more embarrassed, why did I say that? But if I hadn’t said yes then I would be called a loser.

Later that afternoon I begged and begged my mum to let me go, she asked so many questions like “ are there going to be boys? “Is there going to be any red cups?   By that she meant will there be any alcohol? 

“ Well…its Zach’s party plus   he is a boy so yes there will be boys and his only turning 16 so no there will be no alcohol. ”

“Ok but you must be back safely at 10 o’clock.”

“I promise I will, Thank-you Thank-you so much!” she’s actually letting me go for

Once, my parents were always so strict but since my father died my mum has kind of loosen up a-bit. I then left to get changed and get ready for the party.

 It was around 7:00, I put on   black jeans and a white top I really didn’t know what to wear because I wasn’t as beautiful as all the other girls so I stayed simple. I heard a loud HONK! Coming from outside. 

“Mum Ashley’s here!”

“Olivia don’t forget 10 o’clock sharp, No excuses or else your Never I repeat never going to another party again!”

I went out the door and got into Ashley’s mum’s car it was about a 5 minute drive to Zach's house.

“ Yes were here!” exclaimed Ashley. We knocked on the door and Zach had opened the door and welcomed us in. The music was so loud and everyone was dancing like crazy! So went to find Ashley and we started to dance together I was having so much fun but then Amelia and her gang who were the most popular girls in the school had spotted me dancing like a complete idiot an d knocked into me, I turned to look why she did that and she said “ Who invited you Loser?”  “Ahahaha nice one Amelia” laughed Lisa and Emma. I was flushed with sadness I really didn’t know how to reply to that.

“I invited her, I’m friends with Zach and he is said it was alright.” Ofcoures he  had made it up I certainly didn’t know who he  was and why he decided to help me, he had blonde hair, blue eyes and was very tall. Who was he?

“ Thanks, you really didn’t have to do that.”

“ Its my pleasure and anyways they shouldn’t be saying that your smart, pretty and you seem like a nice girl” he replied. “ What’s your name? He asked.

“ My name is Olivia, what’s yours? He was just about to reply then one of his mates had called him and he was gone.

I looked at the clock and the time was 9:50.

“Oh no Ashley we have to go!” I told her.

“No we don’t we’ll stay a little longer they wont notice if your like 10 mins late “ she whispered.

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