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When the writer comments on their own work mid story. For example 'She made a joke an inside joke that only they understood and he stared at her with loving eyes (awww I love them)'.
That has got to stop. I know this isn't a forum for professional writers but you never know who's reading your books and who's out here scouting your work.

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