A story by @faaithxx
I liked the start. Why? Because it wasn't cliché and also because it dived straight into the action. Not action in the literal sense, action as in crux of the story.
The way the writer describes her characters is very realistic. I mean that I was able to visualize the characters. (The cast pictures didn't load because I was reading offline😜)
There are some grammatical errors (punctuation and such) and some typos, but I'm sure they can be corrected.
Also, I like how the writer is keeping her proto's past a secret but still mentioning it time to time, just to keep the readers wondering. 😉
Overall, it is an awesome read!
Rating: 4.5 😊
Hope you aren't disappointed!
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