Breaking up

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**louis' POV**

I lay in bed thoughts floating round my head.

What if teddy somehow gets something harmful?

What if... she goes and hurts Liam?

I can't bear to lose teddy or Liam!

Well, on a happy note I'm seeing Eleanor today so maybe, just maybe she can cheer me up.

I checked my watch, 8:12. Great I'm meeting Eleanor in... 48 minuets!

MATHS GEEK!

I jumped out of bed greeted by a crisp autumn air. brrrrr.

Hmmmmmm blue skinny jeans, 'the who' top, red hoodie and a beanie.

Done!

***

I knocked on Eleanor's door.

No answer. Hmmmmm that's strange she is normally in?

I reached for my keys in my pocket and let myself in. She wouldn't mind, I mean we trust each other now.

"ELEANOR?!" I shouted searching the house. Must be out shopping.

I jumped onto the couch and switched on the TV. It blurred to life, 'friends' appeared on the TV. Mehh it's a good episode lets leave it on.

BEEP BEEP! I checked my phone it was a message.

From Eleanor<3: hey Lou sorry I'm late I was just going to get some milk an then I got bombarded by lots and I mean LOTS of directioners! Just getting a magazine, be back in about 5 mins! Xxxxxx

Awwwwwww I feel sorry for her!

To Eleanor<3: ok elez bellz I'll see you soon! Xxxxxx

I sighed and put my phone down, no matter how much excited I am for seeing Eleanor I'm still worried about teddy. She could really hurt herself.

Just think Eleanor louis.

Eleanor.

Elea- teddy.

Teddy.

NO! ELEANOR!

Gosh I'm going crazy I'm actually talking to myself.

Suddenly I heard the door slam open and in came Eleanor "hi louis!" she sarcastically said through gritted teeth.

Oh gosh she never calls me louis unless I'm in trouble.

"What do you call this!" She exclaimed holding up a magazine.

And on the front of the magazine was a picture of me and teddy at McDonalds, and I was holding her hand from across the table.

Oh...no.

On the picture was 'has louis Tomlinson found a new girl?

What about el?

Has he told her?'

Uh oh.

"Ummmm ele I can explain!" I said frantically racking my brain for an excuse that I don't like teddy in that way at all.

" I don't want to hear it, get out!" she started raising her voice louder.

"Just give me a chance!" I begged.

"GET OUT!" She screamed pointing in the way of the door.

If this was a movie they would either be playing a funeral march or a really sad song.

I stepped outside turning round, I saw Eleanor's glaring face but sad eyes as she watched me walk away. " AND NEVER COME BACK!" She shouted and then slammed the door.

Suddenly dark clouds started to form above me and cold rain started to fall.

"All by myself, don't wanna be all by myself anymore" I half-heartedly sang to myself.

I can't help thinking that this is all Liam's fault.

If he hadn't called teddy fat and ugly she would have never slit her wrists, I wouldn't of found her, we wouldn't of gone to McDonalds and I wouldn't of held her hand!

Ugh! So Liam has basically just ruined a friendship for all of us and a relationship for me.

Thanks a lot mate.

**teddy's POV**

I sat at my window seat looking out as the rain poured on and on outside. I felt like the rain.

People hate me.

No one ever has fun around me.

And I just got washed away the same as the rain does all the time.

See me and the rain could be twins!

I heard a loud knock at the door. I ran downstairs feeling sorry for whoever was out there. Then I realised it could be Liam so I started slow running.

When I finally reached the door I opened it to find a soaking louis. either he was crying or the raindrops had made his eyes go all red and fall in the exact same place as tears.

Hmmmm crying.

"Louis what's up?"

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Yeah I know it's really short but I'm or tired! Also I thought I would be nice to you guys and upload now!

I'm so nice!

Anyways, louis and Eleanor have broke up oh no! What do you think will happen next?

1. Will louis go back to Eleanor?

2. Or will he fall in love with another girl?

Hmmmmm tough choice!

Read or wait on to find out!

New update coming soon!

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