The final kill

Part 1

"HELP HELP ME PLEASE" a girls scream echoed through the the forest. She screamed and screamed as she ran through the forest hoping someone anyone would help her. She heard the man behind her running holding his knife ready to make the kill. He was getting closer and she was getting tired, her legs felt like jello and her lungs felt like they were going to burst. She thought about how good her day had been just about 7 hours ago. She was stupid so stupid to have done what she did. If only she didn't disobey her mom. Her moms words were simple and she remembered the words exactly "honey I am going out shopping and I know you want to go to that party at that kids house but you barely know them now don't forget while I'm gone don't sneak out trust me you will regret it" oh she regretted it. If she hadn't snuck out none of this would have happened. Of course when her mom left she made sure her mom was far enough she wouldn't see her as she ran out. She ran all the way to her friends house before her mom would get home because her mom didn't know where her friend lived. She thought she was so smart and sneaky but wow was she the opposite. "Crap" she spoke to her self snapping out of her thinking as she stumbled. Wow she almost tripped that would have been the death of her even though this probably is anyways. She thought about what happened again. She got to her friends house and knocked on the door but it wasn't her friend or who she thought was her friend who answered, it was a tall guy maybe in his 40's. He told her that her friend was in the basement and for her to follow him. Ugh why did she follow him she was never so stupid. As soon as they got into the basement he shut and locked the door. that was when she freaked out but before she could scream he pounced. Before she knew it she was tied up. She was wondering what was going to happen to her as he dragged into a room. He shoved her into the corner and as she looked around she saw other people plus these were the people that were also invited to the party. She tried to talk to them through the tie in her mouth but as she looked even closer she recoiled in shock. Dead,they were all dead. No please no she didn't believe it, this wasn't happening it couldn't be then as she looked up she saw the man with a bloody knife in his hand. He lunged at her and for the first time she made a smart move she quickly turned to the side and even though the knife grazed her hand it cut the rope. Instantly she pretended to scream in horrible pain and went limp. In the dark room she looked dead and the man laughed and walked out of the room shutting the door behind him. She layed with the dead bodies for 5 minutes till she knew he was gone or at least not close. She untied the ropes on her feet and quietly stood up. She turned the handle. Unlocked. Wow she was lucky. She quietly walked out and up the stairs of the basement. He wasn't there. Yes!. She slowly opened the door and started to walk out, she was free. But as she took the first few steps she heard a voice behind her. "Where are you going my little angel" she looked behind her and right there was the man and the knife. He lunged but she dodged him and started running. She ran and ran, him behind her till she ran into the woods and now she was here. If only she had listened this wouldn't have happened she would have been at home she would live. Her legs started to buckle she couldn't keep this up. She was going to die and she knew it she would never see her mom or dad ever again. Then she heard a deep growl and a bush rattle then in a flash of black white and red she heard a scream then a pool of blood. She looked and on top of the man was the biggest wolf she had ever seen. The wolf scratched and bit at the body more and more till he had to be dead. She knew she should run cause the wolf would be after her next but something told her to stay. She looked at the wolf it was white with black and red highlights and bigger than her. She knew wolves didn't get even close to this big yet here one was. She didn't know why but she said "who are you" with a swirl of dark mist the wolf turned into a human. He was very pale but had dark black hair that came down to the base of his neck with bangs that covered one eye.his eyes were soft deep emerald green. He looked about 13 the same age as her. He gave her a playful smile and moved his bangs out of his eye. Then he shruged and simply said "I guess I'm your new friend"

So should this be the end of the story or should I continue it and make it into a chapter book...I don't know so yea just tell me what you think.  ( plus the pic is what he looks like)