Give Me A Chance

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(I'm so glade that other people are enjoying my story! It makes me so happy! ^,^ Here's the next chapter, I wonder what Fresh will do next, or what Ink will do...)

Error was so confused, he could cry. He was just about to battle his arch-nemeses when the color abomination shows up and decides that they are now dating. 'What the hell?!'  "nO, We arE nOt." Fresh leaned back as if slapped, feeling pain as Error stated that very bluntly. He slumped as his glasses changed 'WHY_NOT', his shades darkened. "Why not br- OH!" Fresh snapped his fingers with a grin,shades brightening up again 'OH_YEAH', remembering what was in the book. "I remember what I'm forgettin'!" 'Step three!' "WhAt NOw-" Fresh grabbed Error, pulling him tightly to his side in a hug, the bouquet about squished by their bodies. "I gotta take you on a totally tubular, so freshly rad date!" Error squirmed around trying to get away, some flowers falling from the bouquet. "No,nO, We aRe GoOd, nO-" Fresh ignored Error, lifting him up bridle style as stood on his skateboard. "Man, I knew I forgot a step!" "LeT me GO FrEsH~"

Ink watched as Fresh rode or skated off into the sunset with Error, literally. He took a big breath as he slowly stood up with denial on what he just witnessed. 'Error and that-that!' Ink straightened up with a glare, rubbing away the few stray tears. He picked up a red carnation and anemone, starring, hoping they catch fire. "No." Ink clinched his fists, crushing the flowers. He started walking forward with purpose. "I will not lose!" 'Why cant Error understand that I just-'

Outertale

"Were here, my soon totes be Brofriend!" Fresh laughed as he got off his skateboard. Fresh strutted to the hill below the stars with Error in his arms still, who was tightly holding on to him. 'Yeah man! It totally workin'!' Fresh thought smugly, even his shades were smug 'I_GOT-IT'. 'Arh~ What pretty colors~' Error was so dizzy from the fast skating Fresh did to get to Outertale (The tricks he did to show off didn't help either), that he forgot who he was holding on to.

Fresh set Error down kinda roughly on the hill, shocking Error out of his dizzy state. Error glared and scooted away as Fresh sat down by him, gripping what was left of the bouquet (If it could still be called that by how it looked after that crazy ride) so tightly that it may snap the rest of the flowers in half. "Now my dawg," Fresh started at he lifted his arms to the stars, as if to showcase them "our super rad-freshly-tastic date can begin!" 'This is actually happening to me right now..' Error thought in disbelief 'I honestly thought it was a glitched out nightmare.'

An awkward,tense silence loomed over them as they sat below the stars. Fresh gulped, not remembering what else he was supposed to do on this 'date' thing! Fresh glanced out at Error, who was looking at the bouquet thoughtfully. 'At least he's liken the flower I got him, that's gotta be brownie points right?' Error hummed in thought, staring at the flowers. 'There's still enough here that I could use to hit him with....hm~,Options for later.' He nodded resolved,it is always good to have back-up plans.

Fresh sighed and adjusted his hat. "So, the stars are pretty," Fresh paused as he got Errors attention "but not as pretty you and I could be!" ~Silence~ "Wigiddy wait- I mean-" Fresh grunted as he turned and dug into his pockets fragrantly searching. Error watched as he turned bright purple, sweating as he pulled out some paper. "Ah-Ha!" Fresh went back to Error "You must be a star because you look beautiful from a distance!" Error blushed, Fresh glanced up from the paper. "Oh, you liken that bae, I gots more~" Fresh looked over his shades and winked.

"If stars would fall every time I think of you, The midnight sky would soon be empty."

"How does it feel, to be the only star in the sky?"

"I think you would beat the moon in a pretty contest."

"Every time I look at you I feel like an astronaut, your beauty makes me float~"

Error was feeling like he was about to glitch out from how hot he was getting, he covered his eyes, embarrassed (and maybe a bit flattered). "WaIT, StOp!" Fresh stopped and looked up, "You don't like'm? Cause I gots other-" Error shook his head frantically, waving his hands out in front of him. "NO! WaIt! whAt dO yoU wANt fRoM Me?!" 'Is this a form of torture?' Fresh scooted closer to Error, hands shooting out to stop the others from moving. Error just stared at the linked hands, slightly glitching at the contact.

Fresh leaned over, so that they were inches apart. 'You gots this! This is were the cure starts!' After Fresh gave himself a mini pep talk, he took off his shades and looked the other deeply in the eyes. "I wanna be a thing- ya know, romantically." Error couldn't look away from the others eyes. Error asked for clarification, just to see if they were on the same page. "YoU meAn a SeRiuS, RoMantIC RelAtionShIP?" 'who would want you like that? how would that even work? he is probably going to hurt you.' "Yeah, so my tubular, radtastic, beyond beautiful bae, could ya give me a chance at this?" Error breathed deeply, this color menace was serious. He was about to reject the other out right, but something stopped him. 'If its just giving him a chance, whats the big deal.' Then he thought darkly 'Its not like other people are lining up to hang out with me.' the voices didn't count. "i GuesS wE CouLd TrY ThiS..."

Fresh grinned so wide that it looked like he would split his face. "Totes for real?!" "YeAh" Error was hoping he didn't regret this. Fresh laughed loudly, feeling his soul race and pound in pure happiness, and then lunged at Error. Error glitched out lightly as they fell down together, Fresh on top cuddled him closely, laughing softly. Fresh looked into Errors eyes, unconsciously loving. 

"Who took the stars out and put them in your eyes~"

The two never hearing the soft crying not too far away.

( I really like this chapter, some nice fluff. I got the pick-up lines from www.jokes4us.com if you want to check it out. I picked the fluffy ones, but I was tempted to put some of the dirty/hilarious ones in. I'll save them for a different chapter. Now that Error and Fresh are dating, the bumpy ride can start. Time for the DRAMA~ and more fluff of course.)

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