Goodbye

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It was day 1 in the hospital , she was on her bed with her best friend and boyfriend. It was her first time on a hospital bed so she was feeling uneasy. 39 minutes later the doctor came into the room , he said "We will be performing Ms.Smith's surgery on August 1st which will be the day after tomorrow" , "Thank ----you for informing ------me sir" Ally said trembling , "My pleasure" said the doctor. Ally then stared out side the window , it was a blank stare she was admiring the rain.

"It's sad you know , the rain falls onto the ground and make homeless people sad because they don't have shelter

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"It's sad you know , the rain falls onto the ground and make homeless people sad because they don't have shelter. It's pretty weird , I know I'm speaking shit right now." Ally said in a cracked voice. She began to walk around her room and moments later the book she was carrying fell out of her hand and something got into her mind and she drove everyone out of the room with force.

 She began to walk around her room and moments later the book she was carrying fell out of her hand and something got into her mind and she drove everyone out of the room with force

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"GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT!!! JASON GET OUT! EVERYONE OUT! HAHAHA!!" Ally yelled. Everyone was afraid so they went out , not one person except Ally was left in the room. She then fell onto the ground and cried like crazy.

"What is wrong with me---I'm---I'm---I'm crazy? I'm sad I want to give up

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"What is wrong with me---I'm---I'm---I'm crazy? I'm sad I want to give up. I can't take it anymore I want to give up but I can't......." Ally said while crying

Nothing happened in day 2 only that Ally was silent all day and would only reply with signs

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Nothing happened in day 2 only that Ally was silent all day and would only reply with signs. Day 3 , the surgery , it was going to commence in an hour. Ally was already there she was ready. Now the surgery commenced , it took exactly 5 hour to complete the surgery. It was a success! Ally's mom and everyone else cried tears of joy they were too happy. Day 4 all was well , Ally was still not happy she felt weird she wanted to cry and she wanted to laugh at the same time she then was very tired so she fell asleep. The next day was her birthday , she was finally going to turn 16. 11:00 p.m August 2nd her mom baked cakes her cousins and friends brought presents they were going to sup rises her at exactly 12 o'clock in the morning unfortunately they couldn't.

The hospital caught on fire at 11:01 p

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The hospital caught on fire at 11:01 p.m. Everyone was in panic they were like scattered chickens. They looked like busy ants working. Nearly all of the patients escaped except.........Ally she was trapped. She ran and ran and ran when she reached to the counter she heard a crying of a girl so she went through all that smoke and took the girl. "Ohh thank you thank you thank you very much" the little girl said crying , "No problem , what's your name sweetheart?" Ally said smiling trying to hold back her tears , "Kelly , my name's Kelly" the girl said , "Ok Kelly let's get out of her as soon as possible and find your mama ok?" said Ally , "OK!" said Kelly cheerfully. The entrance of the hospital was their only exit so they ran and ran and ran near the entrance they saw a woman and heard her screaming "KELLY!". Kelly then ran as fast she could to her Mother and said thank you to Ally , Ally then smiled and waved. She ran and ran and ran and she reached the entrance , unfortunately , a huge brick suddenly fell in front of the open entrance and she was surrounded by fire she tried climbing the brick but she fell down back onto the floor. She was afraid , there were more than a thousand people watching her she knew that if she didn't give up now people would see her tears and she doesn't want that to happen so instead of trying to escape she stood there , they could see her face up to her neck only , she smiled and waved , suddenly an iron stick that was as sharp as a knife fell right into her head , she collapsed onto the ground the blood were all out. It was exactly 12:00 a.m. She smiled and a tear dropped out of her right eye and she died.

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 05, 2016 ⏰

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