Hey guys!!!
I have taken on board your comments, and I agree, it has been a bit boring so far, but....................
This chapter is going to be exciting and possibly a bit violent, not too violent though, don't worry!!
Anyway so lets get into it!!!
Brioletta's P.O.V
I wake up to the sound of my alarm clock ringing, and get dressed.
Soon later I had met up with Violet at school, and we were on our way to first class, drama, when I heard a gun shot.
And another one, I felt something whip past my ear and realised it was a bullet. I put my hand up to my ear and drew it back with blood dripping off it.
I heard a bloodcurdling scream, and realised it was my own only just before I collapsed to the floor and everything went black.
3 days later
Violet's P.O.V
"Oh Mrs. Berilie, I'm so worried about her, it's been three days since the attack and she hasn't woken up!" I exclaimed, watching Brioletta's mum place a cool wet flannel beside her head and leaving without a word.
Why did this happen, who was it that shot at her, why did they shoot her? I had so many questions running though my head.
Then I caught a glimpse of blue in Brioletta's eye, it was beginning to flicker open.
"Oh!" I cried, as I knelt down beside her and gently placed the cool flannel across her forehead once more.
She fluttered her eyes open and looked around.
Brioletta's P.O.V
Suddenly I saw a blurry figure looming over me and heard a soft voice.
"Brioletta," the voice spoke,
"Brioletta, it's me, Violet."
"The m-m" I tried to speak but my head throbbed.
"The m.." Violet began, I felt sorry, as she was trying so hard to understand what I was trying to say and I was so frustrated that I couldn't speak to her.
"The m-me...n" I managed to get out.
"They got away" I yelled when everything went black once more.
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Exciting huh? I hope it wasn't too violent for any of you!
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