The Ring

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Carrie: Hello?

Lizzie: Goodbye?

Carrie: ( Laughs) I didn't kno anyone goes to these parts of the buildings.

Lizzie: well we do.

??: y r u two here? Ur not supposed to be.

( girls running)

( man running faster)

( girls hide inside an old classroom)

Lizzie: y does he come out to get us?

Carrie: Idk but we have this classroom to hide in.

Lizzie: Look! ( look outside the window) he's dead.

Carrie: Let's book it! ( turns the knob) uhh... It's not opening.

Lizzie: Let me try. ( pushes her out of the way)

Carrie: Lizzie, um I don't care how strong u think u r. It's not gon budge.

Lizzie: ( rolls her eyes) whatever. Uhh Carrie? (Points to darkness)

Carrie: it might kill us. I read about something like this. If we inhale some of it,it could kill us in like... 30.7 seconds. The only thing we could do is stay on the down low and don't look up to breath air. I'll tell u when to go.

6 minutes later

Carrie: and...go!

( girls crawling)

After they crawled, they fell through a wall where there was dead bodies and blood... Everywhere. The bodies were grey and there was only on thing that was glowing, was a ring. In the corner of the room...

Carrie: Hey look what I found.( shows her hand off to Lizzie)

Lizzie: Hey um where did u find that?

Carrie: in the corner of the room. Y?

Lizzie: because, that's random. How- u kno what, let me not ask. What if that belonged to someone in this room. What if it's cursed? Or has bad luck?

Carrie: It's going to be ok. If it was cursed, then something would have happened by now.

Lizzie: OMG U THINK U KNO EVERY LITTLE THING THERE IS TO KNO. U DON'T. STOP!

Carrie: I'm sorry. I can't help it.

Lizzie: It's ok. Just try not to do that.

Carrie: Ok. Just try not to shout.

Lizzie: Umm, I'm sorry to break this to u, but I think that's guy, that one sitting up, is looking at that gorgeous ring u have.

Carrie: Is he waking from the dead? This early? How long do u think they were here for? A long time? What if they just got here like 20 minutes ago?

Lizzie: can u please stop talking.

Carrie: ( rolls her eyes) sorry.

Lizzie: yes. He's waking up from the dead. It's kind of bad but his eyes r glued to ur finger.

Carrie: I kno. We have to fix this.

Lizzie: look ( points to the door) the door is open.

Carrie: nooooooo. Really??

( girls run the the door)

Lizzie: the guy has my foot. I can't get it out of his hand.

Carrie: idk what to tell u. He might bite me.

Lizzie: HE'S PUTTING MY FOOT IN HIS MOUTH! AND HIS MOUTH IS FULL OF ACIIIID!

Carrie: I can't help u. Look behing u.

Lizzie: ( turns around) the darkness followed us

Carrie: nooooooo. Really??

Lizzie: ok u need to stop that.

Carrie: ( rolls her eyes)

Lizzie: umm hello? My foot it's burning and it's dissolving.

Carrie: I'll come back for u ( runs out the door)

Lizzie: CARRIE! NOO! ( chokes and dies)

Carrie: uhh I wish I had her with me. I hope she's ok. ( stops running and turns around) OH MY GODD

Darkness: at last I have u. I also have ur little friend. ( shows Lizzie's body) she's dead

Carrie: ( starts crying and runs) U DON'T HAVE ME!!

Darkness: ( goes after her)

Carrie: ( trips and falls) please don't take me

Darkness: then give me THE RING

Carrie: ( tries to pull it off) it's stuck

Darkness: then I'm going to have to take u ( takes Carrie)

Carrie: ( shaking)

🌞WAKES UP🌞

In the hospital

Doc: we're losing her

Carrie: ( having a major seizure)

Lizzie: ( in the room crying) Carrie please don't go.

Doc: it's ok Lizzie.

Carrie: ( rolls her eyes back and talking) darkness please don't take me. THE RING is stuck. U can't blame me. Please. Give me back Lizzie. She's my only twin sister

Lizzie: ( having a major seizure) please darkness give me back to my sister. She's all I have

Doc: oh no. Lizzie's out too.

Doc#2: y r they both talking about darkness

Doc: idk we have to go inside Carrie's head

( doctors go inside Carries head and comes out)

Doc: Carrie had a dream her and Lizzie went to a school with old classrooms. Carrie found a ring which got stuck on her. Lizzie died from the darkness because her sister left her. In the end, the darkness wanted THE RING but she couldn't get it off. So the darkness took her and she had a major seizure.

Doc#2: so what happened with Lizzie,

Doc: twin powers. These twins cannot me mortal. It's impossible tho.

Doc#3: did u see THE RING in her dream?

Doc: yea y?

Doc#3: because that ring was not on Carrie's finger the whole time.

Carrie: ( shaking harder) ( in her dream again, she sees her sister)

Lizzie: Carrie!

Carrie: Lizzie!

( run towards eachother but go no where)

Lizzie: Carrie come here

Carrie: I can't

( voices fading out)

Lizzie: I can't hear u

Carrie: I can't hear u

End of dream

Carrie: ( her heart rate monitor) beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

Lizzie: ( still shaking) beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

Lizzie: ( stops shaking and breathing)

Doc#4: we Lost them both

Years later

Till this day, they say the girls still shake and talk to eachother through dreams. They also say that they both might come back to life every birthday, with twin rings on their fingers...

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⏰ Last updated: Jun 13, 2014 ⏰

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