The four seasons

Introuction of Winter

Disclaimer I do not own Percy Jackson. That belongs to Rick Riodan, or however you spell it.
This isn't going to be a chaos story
No it's gonna be Nyx group of seasons
(I don't know why but I really like having Nyx have a impact in Percy's life)
        
The son of Zeus was walking through the forest, coming back from the quest of slaying a drakon. He was also keeping an eye out of a strange man with raven hair. The man was found being kids to camp half blood. Rumor has it, that the person is named Percy Jackson. The gods want him hunted down and be either killed or captured.      
            As the son of Zeus walked through the forest and slips on something. As he gets back up he wonders what did he slip on, looking down he saw ice everywhere. He  then hears a man walking and jumps into a bush. He peeks out to see a raven hair boy come into the view with a deer over his shoulder. The son of Zeus pulls out his sword and sneaks up to the man and tries to hit him with the bunt of his sword.

Only to be blocked with an ice card.

The man turns around throws a cards at him, pinning him into the tree. An entire deck of ice cards come from his back and started floating around him.He slowly walked up to the son of Zeus, who was shivering in fear. The son of Zeus looks into his green blue colored eyes in fear. Winter puts a card onto his neck and says in a cold deep voice.

"It seems Zeus is going to lose a son today. Tell Hades Winter sent you."

And with that he cuts the Lightning spawn's neck.
How was that as a introduction for Winter. So this is my first story, I don't know how people will react to this story, but I personally like it. Well comment and tell me how it is and how I can improve