okay, so ya'll didn't give me much help as to if i should continue, so i figure why not?
o and just so u know, i'm not a huuge fan of swearing and crap, so my character will only say what needs to be said!!
Love yer Coco!
************************************************************************************ Recap: When I opened the back door of the car, instead of being greeted by an empty seat, I found myself staring at the most beautiful chocolate brown eyes.
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It took me a few seconds to realize that I was gawking at this boy who had surpassing beauty, but eventually I shook myself out of this state, and found my legs long enough to climb into the car.
As soon as I stepped in, his scent overwhelmed me. It was like nothing I had ever smelled before, or will ever smell.
'C'MON HEATHER!! PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER!' my conscious screamed at me, and eventually my body listened.
"Hey Heather!" Cole called from the front, "looking hot today!" After this comment was made, my brother punched him in the arm and whispered something like," Dude, that's my sister!"
I giggled at their own idiocy, and when the exchange between them was done, Cole turned around once more and said," Nick, Heather this is my best friend from grade school, John."
"Hey dude! I'm Nick and that's my sister Heather." Nick greeted him.
"Hello" He said looking at me with an inviting smile that made me want to-
'STOP THINKING ABOUT HIS DAMN MOUTH! YOU JUST MET THIS KID!' my internal voice yelled again.
"Hi, umm, I'm Heather." Was my genius response. To make matters worse, my voice came out shaky and nervous sounding.
"Ya, that's what your brother and Cole just said." Oh my GOD!! Even when he was teasing me his voice had a silky, deep tone.
Just as he said this, Cole decided to pick THAT moment to start to move the car. Since I didn't have my seat belt on yet I fell right over and on top of HIM.
I can't feel when I blush like most people do, but I was sure that at that moment I was about as red as a fire engine.
Luckily, instead of actually landing on him, he turned and steadied me.
'DAMN! This kid's got MAD reflexes!'
"uhhh so-sorry I-I didn't see th-that he was leaving!" I managed to stutter out.
"No problem, it's not every day that you have a pretty girl fall on you." He replied with a smile on his face
Oh my Atlanta!! That smile made his face even more gorgeous if that was pos- WAIT!! Did he say I was pretty?!
Finally, I managed to get back up and put my seat belt on. When I faced front, I saw my brother glaring at John in the rearview mirror.
Soon, I found myself sneaking glances at John in my peripheral vision.
'Wow, he must work out to get arms like those! And look at the way that shirt clings to his chest! *swoon!*. And I know that red-heads are supposed to be crazy, but it suits him!'
After a couple minutes *cough seconds, cough* of looking away, I found my eyes wandering back over to John, only to catch him looking at me.
Once our eyes made contact, I couldn't look away. And from the looks of it, he couldn't either.
When I looked into this boy's eyes that I only met minutes ago, I felt as if we were both exchanging our pasts without saying a word. Or, like we are having an unspoken conversation that involved us sharing our souls.
'This boy has been through so much,' I thought to myself,' it almost looks as if he's been through death and back.' But then again, when I was younger, I thought that Burt and Ernie were just roommates.
"Ah hum," Somebody cleared their throat making me face front again only to see Nick glowering at both John and I.
From my side, I heard the beautiful boy sigh.
'I wonder why Nick cares so much. And what happened between John and me? Maybe he-'
My thoughts were cut off by the car stopping, and voices of teenagers coming from outside.
I turned to the side, grabbed the door handle, and got out.
Once outside, I was ambushed by my brother's annoying questions.
"Why did you fall on him!? And why were you two staring at each other like... ugh I don't even know? You both were staring at each other like you were an old couple in love." Nick shuddered," What was with that, Heather? You just met the-"
"Nick, just stop alright! Calm down, every time that you get that worked up, I can't understand what you are saying. It was nothing; I just met the kid, so just calm down! Besides, he's probably a jerk like Cole and the rest of your friends, so take a chill!" After my little rant, I turned and walked tword the school building like nothing just happened.
"Hey! Wait up!" a voice that I would recognize anywhere called.
I turned only to find John running after me. His red hair bouncing with every step he took.
When he reached me, he said," I need help getting to my classes and well, uhh, can you show me around?" he spoke the last part with what I think to have been a nervous smile.
"Sure!" I chirped, "I'd love to!"
"Great!" he said. And it sounded very sincere, "first, I've got to go get my schedule from the main office. Take me there?"
"Yep, sure just follow me this way..."
As I led John to the main office, I learned more about him.
He plays football, lacrosse, and basketball (which would explain why he's so toned!). And Used to go to school at Fuller Elementary, while I at the time was going to Beester Elementary. Same town, different districts.
When we had finally reached the office, I opened the door and walked in seeing many familiar faces.
"Hey Heather!" One person called to me as another said "Haven't seen you in a while, Heather"
I said 'hello' back to both of them recognizing them from classes.
I let John go up and receive his schedule, whilst I stayed back and waited to see if we had any classes together.
After about two minutes he came back with the classes, and said to me, "Do you have any of these classes?"
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Sorry about just sorta leaving it, but I'm uber tired, and stayed home sick today, so I need some motivation to write.
If you guys could leave your comments for me to read, and some honest criticism, I will be the happiest person in the world!!!! Should I keep going with the story??????
Love yer Coco!