Betrayed son of posiden

The day i was betrayed

I just got back from a quest from Athena to propose to her daughter Annabeth. I had to do the 12 labors of Hercules ,defeat landon the drakon ,and defend against all of the hunters of Artemis for 6 days straight. I haven't seen Annabeth in 9 months . First I decided to go to the Athena cabin to ask Annabeth to meet me at the beach at midnight. On my way to cabin ,everyone was throwing rocks and glaring daggers at me. I nock on the door. It was about 6 seconds until Annabeth's brother Malcom answers the door ''Hey wha-oh its you'' ''yeah is Annabeth here?'' ''No she's at the beach '' ''thanks'' Malcom slams the door in my face and I could hear the crack in my nose. Everybody just laughed and pointed. I just get up ignoring the pain throbbing in my nose. As I get to the beach and hear cheering so I thought hmm must be a special event considering the gods are here what I see horrified me Annabeth was my idiot half brother Roy Harper (Arrow am I right ) ''Roy is my faverout son Percy is a wimp. In fact I disown him as my son .'' I storm over to them every step making an earthquake'' Annabeth I was going to propose to you'' I said with a hurricane forming around me '' I'm sorry Percy you are just not good enough for me anymore '' '' So falling into Tartarus for you wasn't enough for you , completing the 12 labors of Hercules wasn't good enough for you , defeating landon and defending off all of the hunters wasn't good enough for you?'' I practically screamed at her I throw the ring at her and ran away from the place I once called Home .

was that a good chapter? please comment. also I know it was a short chapter I will try to make them longer plus this is my first book