Adopted by Zalfie

Another day

Hi, before I begin the story I just want to say thank you for reading this book.
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Ashley's P.O.V
"Ugg, I am really getting sick of this orphanage!" I say complaining to my friend Taylor.
"Well, who knows, maybe Tomorrow will be your day and you'll get adopted." Taylor says trying to boost my confidence a bit.
"Yeah I guess so" I say doubting myself a bit.
I pull out my phone to check Twitter and I see Zoella's tweet, She announced that she will be going on tour in America for the first time ever! I quickly go to her account and click the link in her bio, it brings me to a page where it says in large capital letters, MEET ZOELLA NOW! I quickly scroll down to see the tour dates and where she is coming I look for my city,
Toronto ON............June 16
Orlando Fl...............June 20
Boston MA..............August 1
Austin TX.................August 8
Buffalo NY...............August 18
Los Angeles CA......August 20
"OMGG!! ZOË SUGG IS COMING TO LOS ANGELES CA ON MY BIRTHDAY!!" I scream in front of the whole park.
"WAIT, WHAT!!" Taylor screams
"I SAID, ZOË SUGG IS COMING..."
"I heard you the first time I'm just really excited!" Taylor interrupts.
"Hold on Zoella is coming to Los Angeles?!" Taylor says calmly
"Yes!" I say
"Ok well way are you waiting for buy the tickets!!" Taylor yells to me.
I quickly click the button that say "buy now!" and I fill in all the information and buy the tickets. It takes me and Taylor a couple of seconds to process what just happened. Then me and Taylor have long fangirl moment.
"Ok I better start heading back to the orphanage, Betty, (the head of the orphanage), is going to start to worry." I say
"Ok bye!" Taylor yells to me
"Bye"
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So what do you think of the first chapter?! Do you think we can get this to 100 reads?!
-Ashley