Arranged Marriage to my Mate [Completed but Editing]

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 TO ALL OF YOU THAT DID  NOT LIKE THE BOOK........

I will be taking this book down and editing it due to all the comments that I have received saying I didn't write this book properly. I agree with much of what you all are saying, though some people are incredibly rude and demeaning to me, claiming that this story was "incredibly stupid", and such. In my defense, I had written this book when I was just about 14 or 15 years old, and decided to keep it up here and not change it, since I'm a college student now and have no time to edit this book from scratch. However, as you all may understand, I don't particularly LIKE demeaning comments, and therefore, I will be editing this entire book during my winter break. I hope you all will like the new copy of the book, as I will be addressing many of the issues that I did not pay attention to when I was writing this. I hope many of you do not think I am a bad writer, for my other stories are popular and well liked, but that's only due to the fact that they were written when I had a much more vast knowledge of writing. No offense to many of the commenters here, but just looking at the punctuation errors in that said comment makes me a little skeptical on how they can judge my writing when their own is not up to par. Again, thank you for all that have read and enjoyed this book. I do not like the way I wrote it and have been wanting to change it, so I will definitely address these issues and hopefully my book is wonderful at the end. Expect the book to be finished by January. Thank you all!(:

Additionally, please excuse my tone in this. I am not trying to sound mean, but I only encourage helpful criticism, not outright rude comments.

For example (I wrote these, nobody else lol):

(GOOD COMMENT)

"I like your story. The plot is good, and the characters are developed, though you went too fast on the actual build up of the story. Maybe you should try to show how Taylor and Leo's relationship builds rather than just stating it. Just my opinion. If this was fixed, then the story would be fantastic!"

(BAD COMMENT)

"So you really don't show the povs properly. I couldn't even read it. It was so confusing. And like what's up with the whole taylor thing? Most people don't just react like that!"

The difference between the two is that one person explains what is wrong with the story, and gives suggestions on how to make it better. The other person just blatantly points out the flaws. How is that supposed to help me as a writer? So please refrain from using comments like that. If I see comments like that, I will defend myself, no doubt.

To everyone who has actually liked or written positive comments/constructive criticism, I thank you very much. Your kindness is duly noted(:

Again, please don't assume that my intention is to attack you. I would just like to verify and defend my place in the matter. It hurts me to see such comments like this. I know this book is awful. I've always hated how I wrote it. It sounds like some mere five year old could write better. I just never had the heart to take it down, and I've never had the time to fix it. I'm a college freshman, and I'm in the honors studies at my university, resulting in quite the difficulty with my studies. In order for me to keep my scholarship, I have to keep my grades up, so you can see why wattpad is not exactly on my list of priorities right now. Thank you for all of you that do not feel the need to insult me. I humbly appreciate it.

Goodbye for now wattpad readers! This book will be tidy and polished by January!(:

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