Get someone you know to read your story and point out any spelling or grammar mistakes for example you don't want to be writing:
Let's eat grandma it's time for dinner.
When your supposed to be writing:
Let's eat, grandma it's time for dinner.
With that one comma you change the meaning. It goes from eating the grandma to calling the grandma for dinner, you don't want that mistake in your book.
Another basic way to make your story better is to actually put effort into it, I know a lot of people in there description writing something like this.
Georgia is the nerd of the school and I know what your thinking
1. Girl meets mate
2. Mate rejects girl
3.girl runs away leaving note about how horrible they are (that always happens)
4. Girl becomes badass
5. Mate wants girl back etc...
But that's not what happens in my werewolf story.
And guess what happens in there werewolf story
1. Girl meets mate
2. Mate rejects girl
3.girl runs away leaving note about how horrible they are (that always happens)
4. Girl becomes badass
5. Mate wants girl back etc...
Put some effort in, stop stealing other people's storylines and give the characters different names people.
Well that's it for now, enjoy.
