My Immortal

906 34 21
                                    

Hey! So in this book I will write short reviews about fanfics generally known in fandoms for being bad. Keep in mind that this is just my silly old opinion and please don't go and harass the authors. So anyway, thanks for reading and enjoy!

The first chapters of My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie made me cry. Bad spelling, terrible plot, a Mary Sue for a main character... This Harry Potter fanfic contains almost all the bad things from other fanfics combined.

But then, somewhere around the tenth chapter, I noticed how hilarious it actually is! This is so bad, it's funny!

This is a quick summary of the plot:

Our main character Ebony has a hard time staying loyal to her boyfriend Draco, because other boys also keep flirting with her. And, Voldemort gives her a gun, and she has to kill Harry Potter/Vampire. But she doesn't want to, because she kinda likes him. But Harry also likes Draco, even though he might still be going out with that prep Britney (I didn't see them breaking up or something).

Also, Snape and Lupin are pedophiles, Dobby watches people having sex, the Golden Trio and their friends are all gothic, Dumbledore is a fan of Avril Lavigne, Muggle bands play in Hogsmeade, and Ebony has to defeat Voldemort by seducing him.

No matter how sucky it is, I think everyone who uses the Internet should read this at least once. It's become so popular, it's really a classic.

Here's my rating:

Writing: 1/10
Spelling and grammar: 1/10
Creativity: 4/10
Humor: 4/10
How much I liked it: 6/10

Total:
16/50
3,2/10

AN: If you know any terrible fanfics you want me to review, please tell me in the comment section or PM me. Next up, Cupcakes!

Bad FanficsWhere stories live. Discover now