AN: I might not update for a while. Things haven't been going too well in the family.
Oh yay, another fun one to review! This short fanfic might be one of the most hilarious things out there on the Internet. Just this description the author, squirrelking, wrote is hilarious.
"John Freeman who is Gordon Freemans brother has to do what has to be done and help Gordon Freemen defeat the enemys."
The spelling is terrible to the point of it being funny and just the way the story is told, and which words the author uses, makes me suspect that this is probably written by some eleven year old kid.
The story has some inconsistencies, but it's worth it purely for the part with the cops. And there's a really funny YouTube video of the fanfic and its *3* sequels, too.
Here's my rating:
Writing: 1/10
Spelling and grammar: 1/10
Creativity: 3/10
Humor: 3/10
How much I liked it: 5/10
Total:
13/50
2,6/10
