The Brighter Side Of Life

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So my really good friend wrote this amazing poem and I though out would be awesome to share it with you all. I think he's incredibly talented and amazing and I really hope you enjoy it! :) He is wacky looking for some feed back so please be active in the comments and voting! !!!

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Coming home

By: PremKush

I see my life, flash before my eyes

The reaper is here but I show no fear

I'm burning up from inside

It's loud outside but quiet in here

I'm sinking fast but show must go

On without me

I know you doubt me

But heaven knows

Just take it slow, man the course

sail without me im almost home

As the darkness fades and light gets brighter

I see the sun and i feel it's power

The commanding voice of my father

I hear the birds, I can smell the flowers

I'm almost there, I'm almost home

He beckons me to come closer

But the closer I come the colder

Before I could change my mind

He wraps his arms around mine

I wake up from what felt like a dream

My life almost lost, I saw my halo beam

Coming back into such a dark world

But I thank the Lord that I am here

because I'm here, I'm home.

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