My RP Characters' Backstories

Gorecoil (part 1)

Note: I used an old drawing because my artblock returned. :T

Hello :^
So, I'm finally writing this....yay?
Okay so I'm not going to make this really detailed, because then this story would be long af (like really fucking long)
First I'm just going to tell some basic things about Gorecoil...
He was born in Germany, and he had two brothers. The older brother is still alive, but the younger one died when Gorecoil was 8 years old. His mother and father fought a lot, because his mother had cheated on his father.
This story starts when Gorecoil was 13 years old.
Oh and this story will be from Gorecoil's point of view.
Well, here we go
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"What? We're moving to America?" I asked from my mom.
"Yes. We have to do it because of your father's work." She answered with a sense of anger in her voice. I turned to look at Aled as to ask his opinion about this.
"...I don't really care." He said. Aled doesn't care about anything. I guess it's because he lost all of his friends a couple months ago.
"But....I don't want to leave my friends!" I yelled to mom.
"Well that's too bad. Now go into your room and start packing." She said.
"I hate you! Why don't you move together with that fucking boyfriend of yours?!" I yelled. I don't even know why I was so angry. She flinched and glared at me.
"Go into your room. Now!" I stared at her for a while and then ran into my room.
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Le time skip :^ (now they're in America)
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I looked out of the window of our car. I hadn't said a word in like 12 hours.
".....Come on, Godric. It isn't that bad." Aled tried to cheer me up. I turned to look at him with a pissed off look on my face and then turned to look at the window again.
"It isn't that bad for you..." I muttered.
"I'm sure you'll get new friends. You're always so talkative." He said and smiled a bit. I fought back the urge to smile. Aled is always so optimistic. Everything was fine until my parents started fighting again. I closed my eyes and tried to ignore it. Why were they even still together? I pressed my head against the window. After a while I fell asleep.
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Le time skip again :^
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I woke up to Aled shaking me slightly. I looked out of the window. It was dark outside.
"Come on. Get out of the car. We're going to buy something." He said and smiled a bit. I yawned and got out of the car. Mom and dad were already outside waiting for us. We were in front of a store. I looked around a bit. I saw a group of some shady looking guys. I pulled on Aled's sleeve and pointed at them.
"....I don't think they're going to do anything..." He said "Now let's go."
I felt really nervous for some reason, but I still followed him when he started walking to the store. Mom and dad were walking in front of us. They were just about to walk past the group of guys when one of them hit my dad in the head with a baseball bat. My mom managed to scream in fear before the same guy did the same to her. I didn't know how to react. Aled's eyes widened. He ran to our parents who were now unconscious.
"Aled! Don't go there!" I yelled, but he didn't listen. He got hit in the head too. I started backing away towards our car. The guys looked at me.
"That brat might call the police. Should we take care of him too?" One of the guys asked.
"Yeah, I think we should." Another one of the guys said. I was really scared at this point. I really regretted leaving the car.
"I-I....I have a gun!" I tried to sound as convincing as possible. The guys laughed.
"Sure you do, kid. Now...Will you come here or do we have to come and get you?" One of the guys said. He looked like the leader of the group. I don't know why. I shook my head and yelled:
"I'm not kidding!" I reached into my pocket as if I had a gun in there. The guys stared at me for a while. For a while I thought that they believed me, but then one of the guys ran at me with a baseball bat. The last thing I felt was a sharp pain on my head.
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Time skip
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I opened my eyes slowly. I was sitting on a chair with my hands tied behind my back. My head was hurting like hell, even moving my eyes hurt a lot. I couldn't see clearly, but I knew that I was in a dimly lit room. I looked around a bit and noticed that there was someone next to me. It was Aled.
"Aled...!" I tried to catch his attention.
"Shh....There's someone behind that door..." He whispered while staring at a door, which was the only entrance to the room. I turned to look at the door.
"....Are you sure?" I asked because I couldn't hear a thing. Aled nodded and looked at me as to say "Now shut up". I nodded and tried to listen. I heard some really quiet shuffling coming from the other side of the door. Then the door opened.
"Ah, you two are already awake." A man with a really low voice said and walked into the room "Then we can start."
He hit the wall behind him with his fist. Two younger looking men stepped into the room. I noticed that they were dragging someone into the room. I couldn't see who it was, but I noticed that the person wasn't moving at all. I looked at Aled with a concerned look on my face.
"That's dad!" He whispered to me. My eyes widened.
"What the hell did you do to our dad?!" I yelled at the men.
"Don't worry, he's still alive. He's just unconscious." The low voiced man said. I glared at him. Then I heard my mom scream.
"Mom...!" I yelled even though I knew that she couldn't hear me. The men laughed.
"Are you scared? Do you want your mommy?" One of the younger looking men asked with a mocking tone.
"What are you doing to her?" Aled asked with a surprisingly calm voice.
"Oh, nothing. She's just hard to keep in place." The low voiced man answered. After a while a guy who was wearing a hoodie came into the room. He was dragging my mom behind him. She was squirming a lot, but the man's grip was really tight. I didn't say anything. I just stared at the man.
"Well, let's start." The low voiced man said. The other men dragged my parents to the center of the room and went to get something. After a while they came back. They were all holding knives. I tried to free my hands, but I couldn't.
"We're not going to do anything to you two. We're just going to kill your parents." The low voiced man said with a grin on his face. I didn't dare to say anything. The hoodie wearing man walked to my dad, grabbed his hair and slapped him to wake him up. My dad groaned in pain and opened his eyes. He didn't even get the chance to say anything before the man slit his throat.
"No!" I screamed. A tear rolled down my cheek as I watched the blood stream down my dad's neck. He tried to gasp for air, but he was choking on his own blood. I couldn't see Aled, but I could hear that he was crying hysterically.
"And now..." the low voiced man said "your mom's turn."
I was too shocked to say anything. I just kept staring at my dad. The hoodie wearing man grabbed my mom's hair and slit her throat too. The blood sprayed all over me and Aled.
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Time skip
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I was in a car again. I couldn't look outside because the windows were darkened. There was a man sitting next to me. He had been trying to make me speak for the last 2 hours or so. Suddenly the car stopped.
"Oh, are we there already?" The man asked. Nobody answered. The door next to me opened and someone pulled me out of the car.

Okay so this is the first part (I have to split the story in two parts because holy fuck, this story is long)
I hope you enjoyed this first part :3
Oh and sorry if my English sucks ass sometimes :^