The flames of ambition

  *  I am honoured to make my first book even though it will be unqualified. I hope you will understand any mistakes i make . Frankly I am not that good in English. Here is my first chapter, if you have any opinions you are so welcome to tell me.

Main characters-*Noah     *Naomi    *Autumn   *Grace    *Leo                                                                                                                     

                          The start of the page

      Life for Noah is like a twisted and hopeless aluminium that can not be straight by any means. From the day he saw the world outside his mother's womb till now. What kind of destiny does he have ? Do we make our destinies or does it lead us ?  Sure life is hard for every one but he thinks he goes through the biggest obstacles . What made him think like that ? What happened ? Let's read carefully !

              Noah lived his life for the sake of his parents without his will. Although he never thought what he want to do from the start.After the continuous process of living , studying ,eating and sleeping he started to get tired of life. He thought what was the difference between him and slaves. Slaves also do what others tells them to do same as him. He works without his will so do as slaves . He is the kind of person who can not express his feelings , expressionless , afraid of darkness (life's darkness) . He have the secret no one can know . Wandering what it is ? Guess ! Opposite to us he prayed to die , to be free . Can he ? He forgot the possibility of existence of one person in life . Who can that be ?

          Noah is 18 years old boy . He is about 1,81 m long . He have the face of seriousness. Beautiful and shiny mid-brown curly hair is one of the characters that make him spottable. When he stares you with his sapphire-blue eyes  you can sense his fear , love and determination. He never smiles. He thinks there is no reason for him to do so. When will he find the reason of life ? Leo and Kai are his friends . They think they are his best friends and know almost his worries. Leo is a cheerful and bright boy. Innocence can define him so well. He is long with light blonde hair and muscular body . Girls find him so attractive with tight jeans and  long boy's sweater . He is athletic also.  His friends sometimes call him Casanova because of his taste in girls.

       In the other hand Kai is a serious , kind and warm hearted person. Anybody would like to be his friend . He doesn't have any interest in dating girls . He can speak Walsh , English , little bit of mandarin and Spanish too .