Tweaking?

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1. Get a story line .

2. Get a back story.

3. Give asuna a hair line.

4. Give more comedy.

5. In least try to keep me interested?

6. Make sense for once, it helps.

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 07, 2016 ⏰

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