Hey guys! Hope your liking my story so far! Comment what you think and this chapter is going to be long so... Hope you enjoy!!! And one more thing! I don't hate Eleanor thats why I made them breakup it's well, you'll see!
Jess' POV
It felt like I walked miles to find Louis. But then I found our bus. I walked inside and then I saw Louis, sitting on the couch while crying his eyes out. 5 minutes passed and he didn't notice I was in the same room as him. I felt something coming on to me. Oh no, it's a sneeze. "Achoo!" I sneezed and then Louis noticed I was in here. It was quiet for a while, then he asked "Why aren't you at the concert?" "I wanted to make sure you were okay. you don't have to tell me but, do you want to talk about Eleanor, and get it out of your head?" i asked. He probably won't want to. I mean c'mom, we just met. "Sure." he said and sat up on the couch and made room for me to sit. "So what happened between you guys?" i said with concern. "Well we have been on tour for a while now and I decided to call Eleanor and see how she was doing. But when I called, this man answered. I asked who he was and why he was at Eleanor's apartment and he said they were having sex because they were boyfriend and girlfriend. I was crushed. I thought we were that kind of couple that wouldn't breakup for a while. I loved her Jess, I really did. Now I don't know if I'll ever love again." said Louis with a terrified look on his face. "Why don't all of us go out tomorrow, like you, Harry, Zayn ,Liam, Niall, Rose, Nichole , and myself. It'll be super fun! And you can get your mind off Eleanor... sound good?" I said hopefully. "Sounds great! What time should we meet you at?" said Louis with a smile. "Why not 11? Does that work for you?" I said. "Sure see ya tomorrow babe!" said Louis. "KK bye!" I said. OMG he just called me babe! This is the best day ever. I think I'm falling for Louis, a little more than usual! I have to tell Nichole and Rose!
As I'm walking back to the concert after-party and I saw Nichole and Rose coming back. I ran to them. They won't belive what just happened! "Hey where have you been? And why do you have that expression on your face?" said Rose. "Rose, Nichole you won't belive what just happened!" "I bet we will!" said Nichole. "So when I was talking to Louis, he called be babe!!! Ahhhh!!" I said with joy. "OMG that's awesome!!" said Nichole. "Girls, you do know that they call everyone "babe" and "love" right!?" said Rose. "Yeah but this one meant something, I can fell it!" I said. "Well of course you can because your in love with him!" said Rose. "I think we should call it a night. I'm so tierd! And we have something planned for tomorrow so be ready at 10:50 because were meeting the boys at 11 to go out." I said. "Okay see ya!" said Rose. " Night Jess!" said Nichole. "Night!" I said. I walked back to my room. I have a feeling tomorrow is gonna be a good day.
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Teen Fiction3 girls(Jess, Rose and Nichole) win a contest on twitter to go on tour with One Direction. Louis has suddenly broken up with long time girlfriend Eleanor Cadler and is now availible and so are Niall and Harry. The boys start to like Jess, Rose, and...