@roroheha

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@roroheha

11/09/2016

Name & display name: 5/10

Y: I think it's a cute username, but maybe you can change your display name? Just an suggestion ^-^ I don't know how you came up with it, but it's cute <3

M : I don't get it, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it just kind of confuses me.

Biography: 6/10

M+Y: So you are new here? Welcome XD I love the first sentence of it! Your bio has a motivating vibe, but I personally think that it's a bit messy. Lots of emoji's too, And please, this is something that eagers me, is instead of 'I'm' or 'I am' you write Iam. Its a detail.

Profile picture:6 /10

Y: It's okay I guess,... I like manga themed and it's in black and white which can be nice. But I can't say 'WoW'

M: Otaku? You'll surely get along with Yukiji *chuckles*

Background picture: 4/10

Y: Fits the color of your profile picture, because it's black and white. again, nothing wow about it, + motivational <3

M:A bit messy and not really a good background but I like the idea behind it ^^ it's very positive

Covers:7 /10

Y: I like the colors of it, and the editing that probably took place is good. It's nicely one themed but a bit Busy. flowers!!!! XD

M: It looks professional but it's a bit too much for me, it's hard to find the title but overall I like the cover.

Description 6/10

Y: I personally like short descriptions more, and again, you want to put too much at once. Keep it simple and just make sure that it will tingle the mind of your reader.

M: It's okay ^^

Title: 7/10

Y: It's says a lot about the story itself, but that doesn't mean it's bad (but again the iam)

M: Your typical romance story, but I don't mind :)

Quote/song/etc:

My room isn't messy, it's full of ideas

Overall score: 41/70


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