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Two days later I find myself standing outside of Heathrow airport, watching my cab drive away.
Orange County California, that's where my mum is and that's where I'm going. I couldn't believe it when she called, I didn't know she wanted anything to do with me, but here I am.
I make my way towards security and put my stuff in that shallow tray. Once I'm out of security I walk towards the closest coffee shop I see. I Walk up to the counter and order a medium chocolate latte and sit down at a small round table. When I am done, I head towards the boarding station. I take a look at my ticket, STATION 28, I look up at the sign above me and it says that I'm at station 17 I guess I don't have to walk too far.
When I arrive at my station they announce that it's time to board the plane so I go to the end of the line and wait for my passport to be checked. When I finally step up to the counter I notice that the chunky little man who was checking the passes is now replaced with a smokin' hot girl. I walk up to her and hand her my passport,"Hey girl ya know it's a good thing I brought a map, because I just got lost in your eyes."I try to say with a deep voice. She looks down trying to hide her blush and I walk away giving her the "call me" signal. Ya I'm that kind if guy but when I find a girl who really like, I will treat her like she's an angel.
When I step on the plane I take my seat at the left window and wait for take off. I've never liked flying it always makes me feel like we could fall out of the sky any second and die (which it could). And watching all of those late night airplane disaster shows don't really help either. I just distract myself by sleeping or watching the tv the whole way there.
I let out a sigh of relief after the plane lands and reach up to get my bag. It flops down on the set in front of me and my passport floats to the ground. I bend over I pic it up but someone else had beat me to it.
"ahem, "I clear my throat as I tap the shoulder of the jerk who picked it up and She whips around. She is beautiful with her long flowing red hair and curvy figure. Her eyes are green and she has a light dusting of freckles.
"oh, sorry is this yours?"she asks. I nod and take the passport in my hand all the while gazing into her eyes.
"thanks,"I manage to say.
"no problem, glad I could help."she replies.
"so," I say snapping myself out of my daze. "what brings you to California?"I ask.
"this plane."she says teasingly.
"ok, well what are you planning on doing in California?"
"I'm here to visit my cousin in his parents mansion. His parents have gone on a month long business trip so he is going all out and having a crazy party."
"cool, I'm here to visit my mum for the first time."
"I guess I might see you around then. Bye."she said before walking away. I let out a breath I didn't realize I was hiding and turn to walk out myself.
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In Orange County
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