Step Three: The First Chapter (Writing Example)

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I got rid of the schedule, so I can post this now instead of waiting another week. :P

Instead of a step-by-step, have an example!

Serious warning: This is bad. REAL BAD.



"And we danced all night to the best song ever.."

My hand slammed down on my alarm clock, shutting off the sound of my absolute favorite song best Song evr by one direction. harry is just soooooooo cute i just cant even when i here his voice.

I pushed back my sky blue, plush blankets and swung my legs over the side of the bed, lowering myself to the dark hardwood floors. The wood was cold and made my feet tingle a little bit so i giggled.

I skipped into my walkin closet and pulled out a 5SOS tank and ripped skinny jeans. I put them on over my expensive black lace bra and underwear, matching of course. I was supposed to be getting dressed for school but the uniform is just sooooooo hideous like mw that i just cant make me wear it, lol.

I skipped into the bathroom and looked into the mirror hanging on the sea green tiled wall. I was super hideous, with my butt-length blonde hair that never frizzed or knoted and my big blue and red eyes. My eys are too different collors and it makes me hideous.. My pours were huge and made my perfectly clear pale skin look even more grosser. My nose was tiny and button-like and my lips were lush and so perfectly shaped i wanted to puke when i saw myself.

I started my usual light makeup routine. Concealer and foundation first, then three layers of a rosy blush, some smokey eye shadow, i traced my ugly eyebrows with an eyebrow pencil the same color as my stupid hair, and then i gave myself a cateye with my liquid eyeliner and then i put on fake lashes to make my hideous eyes poop.

Once all my makeup was good, i checked my nails to make sure my sky blue nail polish hadnt chipped. It hadnt so i ran downstairs, sliding down the railing on the stairs to annoy my butler Sebastian. He always tells me not to do it and its not ladylike but its fun lol.

In other news, sebby is really hot, like... Harry styles hot.

My chef, Bard, gave me my breakfast, a massive stack of pancakes drizzled with all natural maple syrup and bacon and lots and lots of hashbrowns. Mey-rin, my maid, filled my glass with fresh-squezed orange juice. "Thank you" "youre welcome, lady, yes you are!"

Im getting ahead of myself arent I? My name is Anna-Sylvia-Charlotte Melissa-Ryan Smith and I live in Tokyo, korea! Im very rich so i go too ouran Academy a privat school here in tokyo. All the rich ppl go there!

My manson is seven tall and it has a hightec security system that is run from the basement. My daddy is never home but im glad he isnt because hwne hes here he likes to hit me if i do something wrong. I still love him and i know he loves me he just gets mad if i do something wrong.

I finished my breakfast and set my perfectly polished silver spoon with a silver vine wrapping around its handle down. I said goodbye to sebastian before my driver takana took me to the school. I have no freinds since im so ugly and no one likes me.

I sat down alone in my classroom, room a, before someone could beet me up.

no one sat next to me they all hated me. hikary and koari we're the worst they we're whispering about my hair and that i had gained weight and I looked like a commoner in my Fall Out Boy shirt and my Tokyo Ghoul jacket. I like Touka, she's aweosme, so why do they have to be so mean? I cried.

This is my life. The same thing happens every day. I get bullied by the Hitachiinn twins, all because of one thing that the rest of the school can't know.

My name isn't Anna-Sylvia-Charlotte Melissa-Ryan Smith, it's Anna-Sylvia-Charlotte Melissa-Ryan Hitachiin. hikary and koari are my twin brothers.

Kit: what the heck have we done... nononononononononoONONONONONONONONON AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaa

E: yOU DIDN'T HAVE TO WRITE THIS SHIT!!!!

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