This is my first Justin Bieber story, and im really excited. I hope you enjoy the story, and im happy for comments and critics!:) And im anonymous, and english is not my mother tongue language, but ill try as best as i can! And ill write in "I-person", so heres the intro for the story:
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Blake is 15 years old, and now lives in Atlanta with her dad and her twin brother. Her mom died of cancer two years ago, and shes still pretty sensitive on that subject. Blake and her mom was really close and talked about everything, and when i say everything, i mean everything.
Blake used to be a really popular girl, and everyone liked her. She was funny, smart, had good grades and cared about everyone. Ofcourse that could not last forever, and when her mom died things started to be different. Not just with people around Blake, but Blake also started to change. She started to become depressive, angry, and tired. She did never laugh, and was barily moving her look up from the floor. Her old friends started to avoid her, and no one wanted to talk to her. Blair was hurted when she realised no one of her friends wanted to listen to her grief, and she ended up even more depressive and sad. Everything got a mess, and her grades got fucked up. Nothing was right anymore, and Blake had lost all control over her life.
Luckily for her, she had an understanding dad and brother. Her dad had been there for her since day one after her mother died, and understood that she had a rough time. Past these two years things had started to get worse and worse, and Blake could barily stand on her own feets. She could not do anything by her own, and believe me, everything was really a mess. Her dad was, as said, really understanding, but had started to get tired of all this. He was tired of watching Blake as this, and was thinking really hard on what he could do to make her feel better. He had talked to Blake about this, and she agreed, she really wanted to get better.
She started to talk with a psykologist, and things got better for her. She was happier, and her grades started to get better. But she had still one problem -she had lost all of her friends. That was when she came up with an idea, and asked her dad if they could move. Her dad got uncertain, but decided to talk to Blakes twin-brother mike, and listen to what he thought. Mike was and understanding boy, and loved his sister more than anything in the world. Even though he was popular at school and had a lot of friends, he was willing to move away from them to give his sister a better life. Together Mike and his father they decided they would move to Atlanta, and so they did.
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So, this was the intro of the story.. The first three lines describes how Blake is now, so shes 15 in the story. Thanks for reading, i really appreciate you all! :) And tell me what you think!
