Hi everyone, ok so this is an idea that i have about writing a story. If you haven't noticed im a newb so plz not tht harsh ^_^ Advice on if its a good starter where to take it, anything is greatly appreciated.
Clutching the bundle closely to his chest the hooded figure scampers through the woods. The screams from the village pierce the night air and the figure hurries quicker hopping not to be seen by any of the towns' people. After fifteen minutes of running through the woods with the twigs and branches whipping at his body he slows to a stop yards away from Danka,
With his eyes staring at the ground not daring to look into the masters eyes he speaks. "Master I am here to deliver what I have promised to you." Master quickly snatches the little bundle out of the ugly figures hands and removes the covers staring at the baby. You've done well; now off you go before my mood turns sour. While the hooded figure goes further into the woods Danka stares into the little baby girls eyes. She's bright and alert wiggling her hands reaching up to the man that holds her. "Yes" master replies. I shall call you Alicia and you will be a wonderful ruler in a couple of years.
