How NOT To Write A Black Butler Fanfic

just a few pointers

When you are typing please put quotations with what they are saying. For example.

"I loved her, but now she is gone," said Ciel. 

That doesn't confuse the reader with what is being said and  what is being thought. 

Also, when you are typing please try to separate the different things being said. Example below.

Bad:

"It is okay Sebastian. I'll get over her eventually." Ciel told him looking down feeling more sadness than he could ever imagine. Sebastian's lips turned into a frown. "But master-" he was cut off by Ciel. "Leave it." "Are you sure master?" "Yes."

Good:

"It is okay Sebastian. I'll get over her eventually." Ciel told him looking down feeling more sadness than he could ever imagine. Sebastian's lips turned into a frown. 

"But master-" he was cut off by Ciel. 

"Leave it." 

"Are you sure master?"

 "Yes."

It confuses the reader less and sometimes people dont like reading a whole big paragraph and like the spaces in the middle of the words. 

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