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"There are many towns in many places that appears lost..."
Review;
Cover: The cover gives you a glimpse of a town, well it's okay by me but some fans might expect something relating to paranormal.
Title: The title seems interesting, The Town Of A Thousand Tales, it makes the reader begin to wonder what's spectacular about the town.
Blurb: The description was another hook to the story, it starts with a glimpse on the mysterious town which was forgotten. It moved on to a character named Emilie who's not exactly the type to hear the story of Rouvelere. It ends with a mind blowing appetizer, about the reality of Rouvelere.
Prologue: I like how the writer started the prologue talking about the forgotten village which would have been a tourist attraction. The middle paragraph talks about a site in the Rouvelere which was known as, "the village of the white lady." The reason why it was known as that wasn't given, I'm sure you'll find that for yourself when you read the book.
First Chapter: The first chapter starts with Emilie Legere in an old house which wasn't in good condition and all that...
Other Chapters: The length of all the chapters were good, it wasn't short, my guess is 2000 words minimum. The chapters can easily capture anyone to the book.
Punctuation: The writer was good on using the comma, full stops etc, good job.
Pacing: The story's pacing was perfect for the genre, Paranormal, it wasn't too fast nor too slow, it was moderate.
Grammar: I'm sure the writer burnt the midnight candle, it was well written, i didn't spot any grammatical error that can chase readers away.
Tense: The story was written in the past tense which is suitable. I didn't spot any tense error.
Show & Tell details: The writer really knows how to apply show and tell technique, she really showed a lot of things which were necessary to make the reader imagine everything in their head.
Narration: The story was written in the third person narration, not limited, the writer knows how to convey emotions.
Summary: It was a good read, I love the French and German language introduction in the story, it gives it a unique taste.
Crazy thoughts: Seriously! What's the hell is fucking wrong with Emilie, why would she prefer an old abandoned house over mansions, she even smiled when she was supposed to be scared. Is she human?
