Manan TS:Mistake(Completed)√

Manan TS:Mistake

#Manan_TS : #MISTAKE

Shot 3-A
'I m selfish, impatient.I make mistakes.I m out of control nd at time hard to handle,but if u can't handle me at my worst then u sure as hell don't deserve me at my best..'
but its easy to forgive the mistakes from others but its hard to rebuild the trust that has been destroyed..sorry is not enough for all pain..

Avanti-mommy wo untle(uncle) kon tha?apko kyu bula raha tha?
this is the 9th time Avanti asking the same qs to her mother..they reach at home..
Muk-Avu mommy tired hain let her rest chlo tumhe vi to rest karna hain..doctor uncle ne kya kaha yaad haina..
Avanti goes with mukti..

Nan remembers doctor's word-Miss Nandini we hv to do operation as soon as possible otherwise it will effect her brain..

Nan thinks-why my life can't be so easy..ak Rasta khulta hain to dusra bandh ho jata hain..meri jine ki wajah use vi chinna chahte ho ap bhagwan!!why?mera to sabkuch chin liya nd kyu usko wapas bheja jbki nothing is left..7 yrs bad firse wo....now what does he want?
her thought brks bcz of mukti's voice..
Muk-now what? kya chahta hain wo?
Nan-I don't know nd I don't wanna think about it..he is no one for me.I hv to arrange a lot of money..
Muk-but kahase layegi?it's a huge amount..
Nan-kahi se vi..I can't lose my daughter..jiske liye maine ajtak fight kiya hain main aise har nehi man sakti..
Muk-Abhi vi kosis kar raha hain..hamare sath hi itni naniesafi kyu yr..
Nan closes her eyes..
Nan-Avanti?
Muk-Maine use sula diya..

other side
Mnk calls Dhruv..
Mnk-Dhruv..Dhruv u know what mujhe mil geyi..
Dhr-kon?u sound so excited..
Mnk-my daughter.nd my Nandini..
Dhr-what!! seriously..
Mnk-haan u know..my daughter she is so cute so beautiful..bilkul ak pari ki tarha.I hv talked with her.her name is...umm..yeah Avanti.i m so happy.I will find them both nd this time I will not let her go.I want to fix everything..
Dhr-haan bro..but it will be not so easy..
Mnk-I know but I hv to do..

next day
the door bell rings of MukNi's house..
Nandini opens the door nd shocked to see Mnk..she knew it..

Mnk pov-I found her address with great difficulty with my sources..yesterday she ignored me.I know I deserve this.but I want a chance.whatever she will say I will bear everything..so gathering courage I press the door bell nd she opens the door..she is looking pale.she doesn't take care of herself.there is dark circle under her eyes nd that glow nd smile r missing from her face..
pov end

Nan coldly-what do u want?
Mnk-I want to talk..
Nan-there is nothing to talk..u may go..
she about to close the door but Mnk hlds it.
Mnk-pls Nandini..
Nan shouts-don't call me Nandini..u hv no right to take my name Mr....
she about to take his name but stops..
Mnk cms insyd..
Mnk-I know whatever I did...was wrong..
Nan-7 saal lag geya apko ye samajhne mein Mr Malhotra..but u know what apki galti manne ya na manne se ab kuch farak nehi padhta.
Mnk-don't say lyk this..after u left akdin vi aisa nehi tha jab maine tumhe miss nehi kiya.
Nan-I must say u r a realy good actor..I should clap on ur dialogue nehi?
Mnk-Nandini..
Nan shouts with so much angry nd painful tone-what!!miss kiya..tumne akbar vi mujhe dhundne ki kosis ki?akbar vi socha mein kaha geyi akeli?kaise jiungi itni badi duniya mein?Nandini zinda vi hain ya mar geyi?socha tumne? no..tum busy the apni dream mein..apni success mein..nd aj tum aye ho ye bolne..
Mnk-i know what pain u hv gone through..
Nan-no no no Mr Malhotra..u don't know.aur samajh vi nehi paoge bcz tumne face nehi kiya..Maine kiya hain..do u hv any idea ak kumari ma ko samajh kis nazar se dekhti hain?usse har kadam pe kya kya prob face karna padhta hain?
Mnk is standing lowering his head..nd tears strt flowing from Nandini's eyes..
Nan-harjagah sirf ak sawal..tumhari bache ki father kon hain?wo kya tumhare sath nehi raheta?rehhhh kaise bolu ki bache ki father ko ye bacha chahiye hi nehi...usse nam kamana hain..ashman chuna hain..chu to liya tumne fir kyu aye ho yaha?
Mnk-Nandini I realise ki fame,money sabkuch nehi hota..u know hazaro fans ki bij jab khare raheta hoon to lagta hain ki I m Still alone.this loneliness never left me.everything bcm priceless..kabhi laga tha move on kar jaunga but no I couldn't..u was right that day..my Mistake Nandini..nd I want to fix..
Nandini takes a paper nd makes a ball with it nd then give it to him..
Nan-isko sidha karke pehele jaisa banao..
Mnk bcms confused..
Nan-no come on..do it..
Mnk tries to straighten the paper but there is crumble.
Nan-nehi ho raha na?trust is lyk this nly..is crumble ko tum sidha nehi kar sakte..u hv broken my trust.u hv broken my heart..
there Is so many pain insyd her heart..mnk can feel it..
Mnk-I want to heal u..
he goes near her but she takes her feet back..
Nan-don't..u know wahase ane ki bad mere dilme ye biswas tha ki tum mujhe lene wapas aoge but thora thora karke wo tut geya.subah uthti thi to lagta tha ki door bell bajega nd tum waha khare rahoge nd bologe 'Nandini wapas chalo main aa geya' but I was wrong..no not wrong actualy..door bell baja nd tum khare vi ho samne but usdin main jo sunna chahti thi wo aj main nehi sunna chahti hoon..I hv killed my all hopes..zinda hoon sirf us masoom ke liye..
Mnk-Pls I want a chnc..I want u nd our daughter.........
Nandini cuts him btwn..
Nan-our daughter!!!
she nodes her head in no..
Nan shouts-My daughter..she is nly my daughter..tumhare liye wo usdin mar geyi thi jisdin u want me to abort her..9 month maine use apni womb mein rakhi hain.samajh se ladke maine usko janam diya hain..she is mine..not urs..
Mnk-main behak geya tha Nandini..father banne ki khusi mein kaise mehesoos nehi kar paya I don't know? I know u hv suffered a lot.after u left mujhe pehele kuchdin gussa tha but that's not mean maine tumhe nehi dhoonda..dhoonda Nandini but nehi mili tum..pls maf kardo..
Nan-maf kardoon?tum mujhe meri 7 saal lauta sakte ho?
Mnk-no..but agle 7 janmo sath raheneka wada zaroor kar sakta hoon..I love you Nandini..
Nan-stop it..pls stop..leave..chale jao yahase..
Mnk-I wanna meet my daughter..u know kalse main...
Nan-I said leave pls..
Mnk-I m her father Nandini..u can gv her so much love care every thing but ak father ki kami tum puri nehi kar sakti..
Nandini hlds his coller-father!!! tab kaha tha tumhara ye concern jb u said me to abort the child?tab kaha tha ye care jb u broked our relation nd she was growing insyd my womb?tab kaha the tum jb main usko janam de rahi thi nd tumhara nam le rahi thi?u was busy with ur so called movie premiere,u was busy in ur glamour world.ak ph call ka ans nehi diya tumne..
Mnk-ph!!! u called me?
Nan-oh so tumhe pata hi nehi..nd main kitni badi pagal hoon jo soch rahi thi tum aoge..I hate you..I hate you so much..
Nandini lvs his coller nd goes to wall.she places her body weight on it nd crying..her back is facing mnk..Mnk wants to touch her..take her in his embrance but she doesn't allow..
Nan-I hate you for everything u've done to me.no one will ever know the extent of the pain u caused me..my scars run deep because of you..
Mnk goes near her nd hlds her shoulder..after 7 years she feels that same touch..
Mnk-I m sorry..pls gv me a last chnc.
he places his head on her head..
both r in pain..their heart is bleeding..
he carress her arms nd makes her turn..he cups her face nd removes her tears with his thumb..after long long year he is this much close to her..she can feel his smell..
But she cms into her senses nd pushes him..she opens the door nd says him to lv again..
Mnk-akbar meri baby se milne do..
Nan-no..wo tumhari kuch nehi lagti..
suddenly they hear Avanti's crying sound..
Nan without thinking anything runs towrd the room.Mnk too follow her..