Torn /a louis tomlinson love story

You lost me

"What" and then I saw black

LAKENS POV

What's going on I looked up it was all white I looked around and saw a sleeping man sitting there his face was red

How long had I been out

"Sir " I said almost a whisper he looked up "Omg" he muttered he ran out of the room well don't I feel welcome he came back with the doctor.

"Well hello miss" I smiled sadly "where am I" I muttered "who am i" they looked at me shocked "im gonna ask you a question what's your full name" I smiled

"It's Jessica laken hill" he nodded and looked to at the boy "she is correct" I grinned "how old are you?" I giggled "last time I checked I was 13" he looked at me weirdly "ok when were you born"

"July 26 1995" he looked he smiled "Hun I'm afraid you've lost your memory" I was shocked "mind telling me about my life" I asked the boy "I can't ask the blonde" he said harshly "blonde dude tell me about myself" he sighed "well what is the last thing you remember"

"I remember Blake in a car crash then it went blank" he nodded "he died" he said I was shocked "how long" I muttered barley Over a whisper "1 from this day" he whispered I cried harder then I ever had "he's gone" and then I feel asleep.

NIALLS POV

"He's gone" she said sadly and fell asleep "louis" he was crying "why the heck are you crying" he cried "I love her" he said quietly all the boys looked at him "what" me and liam said "your in love with a gold digger" liam said that set me and louis off "SHES NOT A FRICKEN GOLD DIGGER SHE THE LOVE OF MY LIFE YOU SAY THAT ONE MORE TIME AND ILL PUNCH THE CRAP OUT OF YOU" liam looked scared "LOOK SHE ISNT A GOLD DIGGER I've know her my whole life and she has never asked me for money when I pay she won't talk to me for a week.

Liam looked shocked "but then why was she here she barley knows louis yet they were going in a date" I sighed "look louis and laken dated when they were young." It all made sense now to liam.

LOUIS POV

she forgot everything I side and walked to her hospital bed "I love you so fricken much" I said through tears she looked "louis" said or hissed " i hate you" she sighed I guess she is remembering what happened 2 years ago. "Look you forgave please remember me"i cried she looked at me like I was I died in front of her "I'm sorry" and then the heart be slowed down. I cried "sir she'll be alright she has just went to sleep I nodded "I love her" he sighed "i know" and walked away I fell asleep holding her hand.

That morning I was being shakes "Lou take a break I'll stay her" I heard liam say "no liam" he sighed "yes Louis" as he yanked me out of the room.

I walked down the hallway listening to crying and giggling I walked by a little girl "you louis tomlinson" she giggled in excitement I smiled "why are you here is someone hurt is it laken?" she asked out of breath and ran to the room I was once in

BROOKIES POV.

"Why are you here is someone hurt is it laken" he didn't say anything I ran to the room he was in to see a pale laken "laken please wake up" she giggled "laken" she smiled "hi beautiful how are you"

"I'm good why are you here?" she sighed

" I got hit with a shoe a soccer shoe" she said wait the doc said she couldn't remember anyone "how do you remember?" I asked "liam filled me in" I sighed "I want to remember how the 3 years that Blake was in a coma the day he died me finding his twin louis niall meeting harry in the coffee shop crying I want to remember everything" she cried "laken" liam said letting it sink in "I REMEMBER!!!! WHERES NIALL IM GONNA BEAT HIM UP WHWRES LOUIS I NEED TO APOLOGIZE WHERES LIAM IM GONNA KILL 'EM FOR SAYING IM A GOLD DIGGER" then a tired looking louis ran in "I have to go" I murmured "bye" laken said smiling little did I know I would never here her voice again.

LAKENS POV

I remember everything I chuckled louis ran in "louis" I smiled "I'm so so sorry I love you so much please forgive me for putting your though this" I cried he smiled "babe I'm so glad you remember me" and then niall walked in "you" I ran to niall but when I got up my head spun "where am i" and then it went blank.

NIALLS POV

it's been 3 years sense Jess/laken went into a coma it was terrible we went in tour but are on our break something didn't feel right I walked into my room to see someone I hasn't seen in forever am huge smile appeared on her face "hi" she murmured then hugged me "niall I need to ta" "louis" laken screamed as she ran over and kissed him he pushed her back "laken hi how are you your alive" he said sadly I need to fill you in about three months went on after she fell into a coma and louis brought home a girl her name was el short for Eleanor she was pretty but not as pretty as laken

El and Lou had gotten serious but nobody said anything now louis is engaged to el and getting ready to get married and now laken comes into the picture

I felt cold "what the he-" I woke up it was a dream laken wasn't awake I sighed "she's still asleep" Lou nodded he didn't care about her anymore i sighed I got up and got ready "I'm going to see laken" Lou sighed "don't she's not alive" he gave up he finally broke cause I saw tears "lou" "no just go" I sighed

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"I'm here to see laken hill" the lady nodded I walked to her room and told her about my day all of a sudden I felt somebody squeeze my hand "not funny lou....." it wasn't Lou I looked down it was laken she open her eyes and I saw her eyes for the first time in 3 years "laken" I murmured she laughed "niall" she said and hugged me "your alive" i cried "yes I am" she was looking around "hey where's lou" I side hand told her everything "he's engaged" she cried "shhhhhh he's not worth it"

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The doc said we could go home laken was quiet the whole time when we got home she sighed "thanks" we walked in on Eleanor and louis snogging i heard her about to cry i coughed they looked up "hi" she said snuggling closer into me I sighed "Lou aren't you gonna say something "hi nice seeing you later" he said grabbing el's hand and walking off she sighed "he hates me"

"No no he doesn't"