Young M.A Love Story (Revised)

Chapter 1

Omniscient POV:
My'Racle finally gets up and prepares for her shift. She does her daily hygiene then gets dressed and prepares her dancing bag.

She isn't really a stripper but she casually fills in for girls who miss their shift or calls out for the day.

As My'Racle got ready for the day, she played Young M.A on her playlist rapping every song, word for word expressing how much of a fan she is of the Brooklyn rapper. She danced and rapped while finishing her hair and makeup when she realized she was running late but luckily she lived 15mins away from the club so she'd get there in no time.

Once she finished her hair and makeup she grabbed her things, walked out her house making sure to lockup the front door before hopping in her car and driving off to the club.

(My'Racle Outfit)
-10mins Later-

Omniscient POV Still:
After My'Racle getting her Starbucks vanilla bean frappe and a lemon loaf on the way driving to work she finally pulled up in front of her job Black Diamond, turned her car off and grabbed her belongings before closing her door and locking her car doors before then entering the building.

Once she got in she greeted some of her coworkers and headed to the back to get ready for her first shift. Once she reached the locker room she found her Bestfriend getting ready.
-Conversation-
Aaliyah: MY'RACLEEE!!

My'Racle: AALIYAH!!

-Exchanges Hugs-

Aaliyah: How's everything boo? Did you and Tweety work things out?

My'Racle: Everything is fine babes, me and Tweety called it quits last weekend.

Aaliyah: Awww I'm sorry baby. You'll find someone who will love you for you.

My'Racle: I know but let me get dressed then we can talk more

Aaliyah: Go ahead boo.

-My'Racle gets dressed in this-

-After getting dressed and talking to Aaliyah more, My'Racle goes out and gets a shot from the bar-

Bartender: Hey boo, what you want to drink mama?

My'Racle: Let me get a shot of José Cuervo

Aaliyah: Let me get a shot of Casamigo

-The bartender prepares the girls drinks when the DJ yells into the microphone-

DJ: YOOOO BLACK DIAMOND STRIP CLUB IMA NEED YOU TO SHOW MY NIGGA SOME LOVE, WE GOT YOUNG M.A IN THE BUILDING SO BROOKLYN SHOW MY NIGGA SOME LOVE.

My'Racle freezes up when she hear that Young M.A is in the building.

Once She Downs Her Shot She Hears The DJ Yell, "ALRIGHT EVERYONE LETS GIVE IT UP TO YOUR FAVORITE DANCER OF THE NIGHT PASSIONNNN!!!"

-My'Racle walks up on the stage and starts putting on her best show while Young M.A song "Wahlinn" Blare through the speakers. She does all her unseen stunts while a money shower takes place over her. As she dances she spots Young and Tweety staring at her perform. After an additional 10 mins of performing , My'Racle was done and grabbed all her money off the stage with the help of security.

-Cliffhanger-
Here's a redo of the first chapter, how ya think I did?
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