10 things

Sorry

I know this is just a rant but some of the points I see a lot Especialy #1, #2 I get if its a new book but after a while it's just cringy as all hell and makes me wish I can go into the book and make the changes . It also makes me want to drop the book that much faster. welp those are my 10 feel free to tell me what annoys you the most about a writer or about writing in the story it can even be a combination of both