So yeah, throwing out a shitty story with all your fanfiction cliches and cringetastic shit in a book. Theres a reason why Im doing this. Will I tell you? Nope, goodluck. You're gonna need it jajajjaajajajajafightmejajajajajajjajajajajaja
Also, this has nothing to do about me being against self inserts. Ive read a lot self inserts and if they are well done, I go as far as saying that they're my favorite type of fic. But theres sooooooo many of them that aren't written correctly and are just plain cringy and thats what Im criticizing in this story. All the mary sues and overused cliches. Cliches aren't wrong either! But please don't make your entire story revolve around that or put 4-5 different or similar cliches in one sentence, paragraph, or chapter. Hopefully you can see how horrible this truly is and make yourself a promise to write better than that Bioshock Flan fag. Anywhore enjoy ;))
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Velocity
HumorLife's not easy when you're a pretty eighteen year old that has basically everything in life going their way. Seriously! Living the perfect life is hard! Parents praising me for being the perfect daughter all the time, getting everything I want when...
