Story by Shayminkid123
A Pokemon Adventure {Romance/Adventure/Action}
FINISHED
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Plot: 9/10
Characters: 8/10
Pace: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10
Enjoyment: 9/10
End Score: 8.2/10
Shayminkid123 came up with a brilliant plot, and for the most part, executed it excellently. Some grammar and spelling mistakes hindered the flow of the story a little, and in some areas it was a little unclear. In addition, the pacing of the story was sometimes rushed, and I felt that the climax came rushing out at me. However, the characters were developed wonderfully, and the use of descriptive words really painted a picture in my head. On top of all that, the epilogue was beautiful.
I would recommend this book to those of you who don't have much time to read in the day, and would like a book that really keeps you reading until the very end.
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