Hey guys! Sorry this isn't an update, but I need to ask you people something. For anyone who reads Tempus, can you tell me if you think I should delete my first chapter/prologue, or rewrite it or what. I know it's confusing and horrible and probably scares away readers, but I don't know what to do with it.
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Tempus
FantasyLilith Black. An ordinary human child, born to ordinary human parents. Until a variable, something unforseen, pops into the picture. This variable destroys her little world, and sends her to a place untouched by those of Planet Earth. This world is...
