Note: This story may be under serious editing until marked completed. Chapters updated may not be final. Chapters may change, but the story line will not change.
All feedback is appreciated, good and bad, so hopefully I can edit and amend. I have never tried writing a story longer than 200 words so we'll see how this goes.
Also my grammar may not be the greatest and I may add the occasional comma, where, it's, not, needed. Read on and leave comments on every paragraph if your little heart desires it.
In fact I challenge all of you to comment on every paragraph, be the first to comment. Actually that may be pretty easy until the story gets a start, but what the heck, who cares? Continue on now, don't mind my rambling. Enjoy the story, love.
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What Is And What Should Never Have Been
AdventureAna has suffered a great loss, the loss of her mother. She now faces eviction from her childhood home since she can't make the rent payments on her own. With no where else to go, Ana seeks out her father, who she had never known before. Will what sh...
