BOOK PROMOTIONS.

POEMS BY @lazyakacrazy

Title:- Poems.

Author:- lazyakacrazy

Genre:- Poetry.

Current Rank:- #26 in poetry.

Summary:- Collection of random genre of poems written by lazyakacrazy.

EXCERPT 1:-

 And I have no soldiers

I have to fight on my own

I have to build my own shield

I'm the only warrior

Probably, I may not win

But I'm not gonna let them win with out a fight.

                                                    -Excerpt from madness.

EXCERPT 2:-

So watch me as I break these walls

And fly into the sky,

Away from you,

Away from your madness.

-Excerpt from caged bird.

Critique:-

                        Your every poem is unique and very expressive.They are written in simple language but must say they are very powerful. You got Gauri here crying on one of your poems no jokes. Some of your stories must have taken great courage to pen them down and for that hats off. You are really amazing at expressing love and darkness in life. We really enjoyed reading your poems.

So,here is the constructive criticism, Your majority of poems are amazing, literally get it published somewhere, I swear. But I think even you would agree you should proof read your first few poems, just the first 4 or 5. We would also suggest playing around with words,you could use figures of speech!

Other than that, You are truly a gifted poet. Keep writing poems!!! :)

Your poems would go a long way!!!