Bubbled Moments

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eddyray26 wanted me to review their book, "Bubbled Moments."

I have not read the whole story yet, but I read the prologue and first chapter

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I have not read the whole story yet, but I read the prologue and first chapter.

I really like the idea of the story and where it's going. As I continue to read it, I will give much better feedback.

I also noticed the story has good grammar and a nice format. That's always important.

But yes, you have pleased the king of Hell! That's an accomplishment! Well done!

You've reached the end of published parts.

⏰ Last updated: Nov 04, 2016 ⏰

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