Ok, first can I just say this is the sweetest story ever. Your writing skills are intriguing and for non-fiction you showed good voice. I might have included more sensory details but other than that you told the story very well.
I really did enjoy the story, as a fellow dog lover I wouldn't have done anything differently. Thank
you for posting such a beautiful story for the wattpad world to see.
Great job teenagebookworm_ , I really enjoyed it plz comment if this was a good critique for what you requested, if not tell me how to do better, thanx love y'all bye.
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Ficción GeneralJust what the title says. This is where I'll write my in depth critiques on any books I critique. You can find me in @c_critiques book constructive critiques, I'm critic Critical Dragon.
