Jack sat there when he saw. The dark machine getting stronger and stronger and the pitch said " so jack see how strong I'm getting" jack just. Looked at him then looked back to see loads of children caged up. And then he watched as all the children got pushed about and there sad and scared faces and then jack done a sad face because he could even fight his way out because he was weak of all the darkness and fear. And then the children were draged into a room and then there was scraeming and then all the kids came out with yellow eyes saying " all hail pitch" and then they walked off into a cave and then the door shut behind them and then jack was draged away from that room to see angel coming towards the lair and then jack looked closer and saw bunny, tooth, north and sandy coming behind her. " Well looks like they are gonna fight you out to bad they won't live to see you FEARLINES ATTACK CHILDREN ATTACK" and then jack watched as all the guys outside got beaten down by the fearlines and the children but the gruadians won't fight the children because they are ment to protect the children not kill them.
Jack: your a monster!
Pitch: a monster I see my self as a solder which is doing his business
Jack: nope your nothing but a horrable monstart
Pitch: fearlines take him to the jail
Jack: no point because you'll lose like last time
Pitch turned round and went to jack and whispered in his ear " I know your scare so don't worry about showing it" and then he held his hand and then the fearlines grabed jack and toke him away and pitch looked through the window to see everyone getting weak and then he shouted " bring them to me"
