ok. so this is my first real story that i am taking a real interest in and i am planning on updating constantly. please tell me what you think.
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chapter 1
(Lucien's pov)
i groaned. i rolled over and smashed my hand down against the blasted alarm clock. i dragged myself out of bed and shuffled to the bathroom. i did my usual morning things and left to school in my black truck. i parked a few blocks away and got out. the reason i did was because if my bullies from hell saw it they would destroy it. and i didn't want that to happen to my baby. i entered the school and went straight to my new locker. it WAS a new school year after all. i just hoped i wasn't by anyone that hated me and would leave me alone. but, unfortunately, the universe hated me and decided to be mean and put me in the middle of six lockers. three on one side, two on the other. and just as i opened my locker, a hand clamped down painfully on my shoulder and spun me around to face the five sneering faces of my enemies. Tanner, Matt, Damien, Keith, and Snake.
Snake was the oldest of them all. they where all brothers too, so they probably spent their time planning more ways to ruin my life. Snake was the one who had clamped my shoulder and spun me around. i tried unsuccessfully to get out of his iron grip. he sneered at me.
"looks like were stuck with you for the rest of the year. this will be fun" he said with a smirk. he let me go and i hurried away to my first class. why did fate have a cruel sense of humour?
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i know its not that great. but please give comments and tell me what would need changing.
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