PUPPIES OVERLOAD Part 1

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(Still Jacks POV)

I woke up this morning feeling good about what I'm about to do. I got ready for today and me, Sammy and Nate hopped in the car to go to our destination.

"Are you sure about this? I mean we don't even know the guy?" Sammy asked alittle scared.
"No. it if this what it takes for Rylie to forgive me then I'll do it." I told them.

When we arrived to where we are getting the puppy from. We hopped out of the car and I was the first one at the door so I knocked.

"Hello?!" A guy voice asked
"Hi I'm Jack Gilinsky, I called you last night about some Austrian shepherds puppies."
"Oh yes, come in." He said letting us in.
"Right over there" he says pointing to a large cage.
We walked over to the cage and there was 6 beautiful puppies.. why can't I take them all? I thinking about it!? Rylie would forgive me then? Right?

"I'll take them all." I said without thinking.
"Okay. That will be $2,000" he said
"Dude are you crazy!?! I thought we came here to get one!! One fricken puppy not 6?!?" Sammy wispherd yell In my ear.
I handed the guy the money and Sammy and Nate helped me with the puppies.

Once we got to in the car, tons of questions were asked and some of them I could and couldn't answer.

"So what now? How do we surprise her?" Nate asked and Sammy agreed
"Well I was thinking first we go to the pet store then we do a fun scavenger hunt." I said
"That doesn't sound bad at all!" They said agreeing with me.

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Once we arrive to the pet store we hopped out with the 6 puppies and put them all in the shopping cart. We then we to the food idle and bought tons of wet dog food, we then went to get them a bed and food dishes. We also went to get leashes and collars and dog tags. Then treats and our favorite part the toys! We each picked out 14 toys for each puppy.

We went to check out and the total was $584.90. We checked out and Nate and Sammy were righting down the clues.

Rylie POV:

I woke up this morning to only Jj in the house, when I asked him were the guys were he just ignore me and continue what he was doing.

Nate and Sammy finally came inside. They were doing a bunch of stuff and getting things.

I was going to walk outside when Jj stopped me by saying, "Jack wants you to stay inside for a little bit, so please do so."

"Ohh, you talk?!" I say in sarcasm
"Rylie here." Nate says handing me a note card.

I was hessite to do open but I did.

Rylie I have a sweet surprised for you... i know u don't like surprises but this one will be good.. nate and sam will help you out a little. You only have 5 hints. Use them wisely!!

Go to the bathroom and look for your first clue!!

"This is going to be the death of me, I swear!" I tell them. They just start laughing
I walked into the bathroom to find my first clue.

It reads:

What sport does me and the guys love the most? Go there were we play it!!

I handed sam the note, he looked at me funny and we walked there. I found the next clue under the basketball that was next to the goal.

It reads:

I see I have a smart sister!! Now go to the old dog house that is in the backyard!!

I went to the doghouse.. there I found a present. I was about to open it when Sammy and Nate laughed at something? I don't know what. And yes they were following me. I know, annoying right?

I open the gift and it was a picture of six puppies. I'm so confused?

I then open the letter, it reads:

Now go into your bedroom and look for another gift and present!!

I'm starting to get annoyed with all of this.. I just want the surprise! I walked inside, upstairs and into my bedroom. It took me awhile trying to find the gift and clue but I soon found it.

I open the gift and it was a wet dog food, food dishes and treats!! Now I'm excited!!

The clue reads:

Im sorry this isn't your clue, please go to the place I hang out the most and find your next clue. Don't get angry yet Rylie this is almost over I promise.
- Jack

I walked into his room and looked but
Nope. I went all to the places I would think he would be and looked but nope, no clue.

"Do you need a clue?!" Sammy asked me. I sat on the floor in the basement thinking about were it could be.

"Yea" I told them

"Okay go to the living room" he said. So I did. I went into the living room to find the clue and a bunch of doggy toys, a dog bed, leashes, collars.

The clue reads:

Now go to the club house!!

I ran to the club house to find Jack with 6 puppies!! My dream has come true finally!!

I ran to Jack and gave him the biggest hug ever!!

"So you forgive me?" He asked. I just nodded my head....

Hi guys!! This is my 7th fanfic of the Omaha boys!! I hope you enjoy. Please leave a comment about what you think of this book. Comment suggestions about what I should do with this book!! How should I write about the start of nate and Rylie falling for each other? How should they fall in love? How does Jack react to his best friend and sister falling for each other? Leave a vote too!!
Your comment, suggestions, and votes are really mean a lot to me!!
There will be a part 2 of this chapter!!
P.s this book is 10020 words!

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⏰ Last updated: Nov 21, 2016 ⏰

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