The Story of Killer Dan

July 18, 1978
Nothing is lost without a promise. Nothing is gone with out death. Find your promise with death.

"Please Dan! Stop!" said the women. "You can't be broken unless you are in pieces." Said Dan, Dan heard the voice of the women screaming in fear and depression. The fear in himself and the sadness that rains upon him like needles falling from the rain clouds. " It was your fault Rebecca!" Dan sobbed

"What are you talking about, my name is Barbara! Why are you doing this" screamed Barbara. "Why did you leave me!" Dan screamed as he pressed his fingers up against Barbara's throat and clenched. He took her by the neck and held her up against the wall and pressed harder and harder until she wrinkled the eyelids of her eyes, the eyes were losing color and turning cold and white. Dan clenched until Barbara fell to the ground dead.

3 days before

"Hello Dan" said on person, "Dan, Hey"  said another. Dan was walking his dog through the town. "Hello" replied Dan to all his fellow neighbors. Dan had a wonderful life with a beautiful women as his wife. But today he finds a secret that has been hidden within. "Good Morning Rebecca." Said Dan "Morning Dan" replied Rebecca. This was the good old times when life was a good life and Dan was a happy man.

Day 2 before the Kidnapping

Dan was just at the office where he works and wondering what Rebecca was up to. Dan left his work and went home. Rebecca I'm home.....Rebecca" said confused Dan. Dan was about to walk into his room until he heard voices in the back room. "Rebecca where are you! " Dan exclaimed as he opened the back room door. "Dan, this is not what it looks like" said Rebecca " Are you sure Rebecca? What I see is you laying in the same bed with another man!" Dan said as he left the room "Dan wait, please." Said Rebecca. Dan left the room and then grabbed a crowbar out of his work bag and headed towards the room. "Dan what are you doing?" Asking afraid Rebecca. Dan headed towards Rebecca and the man and lifted his arm. "Dan stop! Please stop" screamed sobbing Rebecca. "It's not death unless you suffer." Dan said as he  lunged the end of the crowbar into both of chests of Rebecca and the man with blood rushing towards Dan's feet. "What did I do!" Screamed Dan," I have to hide the bodies" Dan grabbed the crowbar after dropping it and went to the kitchen, then layed it down on the dining table. He then picked up Rebecca and layed her down in the bath tub. He looked in her hair and found a flower, he doesn't know what flower it is. But after that he took the man and layed him also in the bathtub. After that he shut the door and left the room and went into the living room and grabbed his phone. "What kind of flower is that?" Whispered Dan to himself. "Jasmine, it's a Jasmine, what does that mean?" Dan picked up the sheets from the back room and threw them on the floor. He then turned on the shower in the bathtub and let the water rinse off the bodies. Outside he started a fire, he threw the sheets in the fire until they burned fully and disappeared. The bed still had a little blood on it so he scrubbed it until it was partially gone. "What did I do." Sobbed Dan. After the bodies were clean he took them and buried Rebecca and the man in the backyard while no one was watching. It was now night and everyone was asleep, Dan was still sad about Rebecca so he went for a walk outside. He went to the bar down the street and got some drinks. When he was at the bar, this women was watching him. "Hello" asked the women "Hello" replied Dan. " I'm Barbara" said the women.

The Present

"Dan stop please!" "Stop!" Screamed Barbara. "Rebecca shut up" Dan yelled. Dan grabbed her by the throat and clenched until she fell to the ground dead. Dan was so frightened of what happened that he stripped her down and set her in the bathtub to get her clean. Dan then grabbed Rebecca's clothes and makeup and slipped the clothes on Barbara and put on the makeup and made her look like Rebecca. The morning of the killing the police came to Dan's home, looking for Barbara and Dan was ready. "Hello men, do you want to see my wife" said Dan as the police entered his home."Sure" said the police in confusion, Dan walked to the back room and opened the door. There the police saw Barbara dressed like Rebecca. The makeup was running down Barbara's cheek and then she fell of the bed she sat on. Dan kept laughing and the police decided to take him away to a mental hospital where he laughed and laughed and laughed to his death.

5 years later the backyard of Dan's house was covered in Jasmines.

Sorry about this short story. I know it was not well written but I will soon make a remake of it and make it better but I hope you get the idea of it but I will make a new one bye.