Black underworld

what the hell is that thing ???

I start to walk over to my room inside of the mansion, looking outside the window to my left, sun out of site , rain drizzling lazily, and the kids on the curb watching the horse drawn carriges. I quickly turn my head and start to slow down as I reach my door. " oh my God really ? Oh my " I hear through the door. " great... He's here..." I think before opening my roommate and my door. I walk in and grab my already packed suit case

"hello joeanna and ren" I say a bit aggravated looking at ren pinning joeanna down to the bed. " oh , she's back..." Joeanna sighed and pushed ren away."why don't you move in with me ?" Ren asked. Joeanne smiled "eeeekk...of course I will..." she said pulling him into a tight embrace. " um...joeanne...will you accompany me with something important later this afternoon?" I inquire at the two hugging. "oh...sure..." she said kissing him and going at it again. " well bye" I waved and exited quickly and mumbled under my breath " idiots" a maid and servent relationship isn't allowed. I walk down the corridor and out to the pastor looking at the flowers until I come upon a small cottage where the gardeners live. I knock " lacy! merri ! ... open up its me Layla..." I yell and turn to see a dark orb flying at me "hey...please!" I say and turn back to look at the orb. as I start to panic,  the door swings open and I fall straight on the floor.  "LAYLA " I hear before being pulled up and devoured in hugs from merri and lacy. "hey... something was..." I couldn't finish my sentance I started into one of my panic attacks and started to cry as j felt my throat close in. Merri and lacy caught my frail body and laid me onto a burandy couch.  I soon was able to talk and then I remember every thing going dark.

okay so sorry for not updating but I have been doing other things and got distracted . tell me what you think of my story so far and k hope my next chapter will be finished by Christmas!!!!!