Off To Australia?

Piolot Part 1

      Evelyn- Normal
      Third person- Italic

My eyes fluttered open, as I realized I was no longer on the plane that was supposed to bring me to Australia. I was breathing heavily. I was surrounded by Bamboo. Our plane crashed. But where?

I continue to lay there. On the ground. Then I turn my head the other way because I heard crackling. Almost like foot steps. It came closer to me. It was a dog. A golden Retriever, I believe. It then ran off.

I grunt as I get up. It was a little tricky but I managed. I was leaning against the bamboo. I wiped my face with my hand, it was bloody. I start running, looking for people. I can't be the only one who landed here, stranded.

I continue to run. Then I see a person running, he was wearing a black suit and a tie. I run up to him. "Hey!" I said as we both got out of the bamboo maze, we were on a beach. But it wasn't filled with people. It was empty.

"Do you here that?" I ask him. He finally turned his head to look at me. I gulped. "Yeah. I do." He said. "What's your name?" He asks me. "Evelyn. Evelyn Green. You?" I ask him. "Jack Shepherd. But just call me Jack." He said. "Hey, aren't you a doctor?" I ask him. "Yeah, I am. We better go help those people." He replied. I nodded and said, "Good idea."

We ran closer to where the noise was coming from. There was a lot of people. They were all screaming, part of the plane wheel thing was moving, and it was blowing air, and it was making a ton of noise.

We heard a man yell, "Help me!" Jack and I were running. We heard more people yell, "Help me! We need help!" Someone yelled, "Walt!" Then another, "Stay away from me!"

There was a women just standing there screaming. Jack and I just stood there not knowing what to do. "Somebody help me!" The man yelled. A man was stuck under wreckage from the plane. We both ran over to him. "Ahh, my leg." The man said. We both tried to lift it up but we couldn't. We both weren't strong enough.

"Hey you give us a hand!" Jack yelled. "Dude come on! Come over here!"  He yelled to other men. "On the count on three,  One, Two, Three!" We all yelled while pulling the man out from under the wreckage.

The man's leg was all bloody. Jack took his tie and wrapped it around his leg. "Please help me, Help me!" We heard a women scream. She was pregnant. "Get him out of here, get him away from the engine!" Jack yelled to the bald guy who was helping us.

Jack and I run to the women. Jack and I sit down next to her. She puts her arms on Jack. "Please don't! Don't! I'm just having contractions." The women said. "How many months pregnant are ya?" Jack asks. "I'm uh, 8 months." She said. "How far are they coming?" Jack asks.

"I don't know. It just happened. " The women said. "Hey, hey hey. Get away from that!" The bald guy yelled at the man who was near the engine. The bald guy was helping another guy, carry the guy who was under the wreckage. The man was trying to say something but then he flew into the engine. Oh god...... I thought, I placed my hand on my forehead. 

Then it exploded and we all fell backwards. Jack was hovering over the women to block her from harms way. Fire was flying everywhere. "Listen to me. Look at me." Jack said to the women. "Your going to be ok. Do you understand me?" Jack asks. "But you have to stay absolutely still." He said. The women grunted. "Hey you. Come here!" Jack yelled to the guy with Curley hair. He ran up to him. "Get this women away from these fields. Take her over there stay with her." Jack said. "If her contractions occur closer than three minutes apart. Call out for me." Jack said. "Oh you got to be kidding me." He said. "Ok." Jack said as he placed his arm on the women. "Thank you, she mumbled back."

   "You, Evelyn. Come with me." Jack said to me. "Ok." I said. "Hey what's your name?" The curly guy asks Jack. "Jack!" He yells back.

     We both went over to the man who was giving the women laying on the ground who was unconscious. "Stop! Your not far Back enough. Your not blowing in air into her stomach." Jack said. "You sure?" The young guy asks. "He's right." I told the young man.