Unbelievable

   Hey therree...first part of a story im starting...might seem incomplete..because it is lol. Hope you guys like it::)

        She kept on running. Running from the almost distant and forgotten past. She had clung for dear life only for the one man she loved to leave her, stranded, holding her last breath. Thoughts kept circling through her head, reminding her of how hurt she felt. There was no word, no word whatsoever, to dscribe this intense feeling of pain she felt. Once seen as a beautiful, friendly and amazing girl, now nothing more than a heartless witch. Was this her fault? Had she done anything to deserve this?You may be asking yourself this question. Well, let's see...

     Zabzaya was a normal seventeen year old girl, other than the fact that her mother had left her at the age of 5. Just beginning to see her purpose in life, just beginning to find the essense of what life really is. She had a fairly good life. Being raised in a middle class family with little or no problems. Sometimes watching those around her suffer for no reason, wondering how life could be so cruel. She had a fairly great life compared to some people around her. Some people may even envy her for her fortunate life. Littledid she know that life for her was about to change greatly.

      It was normal Sunday afternoon, at home waiting for supper when the incident occured. Zabzaya received the most shocking phone call of her life. *phone rings* "Hello," she says. She hears nothing but crying. "Zabzaya,come down to the hospital right away.Room 324A. Please, come quickly!"the person urged. At this point, she began to wonder if something had happened to one of her parents, or if her sister had gotten into an accident. Thought after thought kept rushing through her head, Sh e tried to think positively and calm herself. She grabbed her coat and rushed to the hospital as fast as she could. Forgetting that the hospital doors were not automatic, Zabzaya crashed right into them. She rubbed her head, opened the door and made her way in. She frantically asked the front desk where the room was. She ran straight to the room, only to find her aunt laying down in bed, an IV attached to her hand, oxygen tubes in her nose and several bruises on her arms and legs. "Wha-What hapened?" she asked. Her aunt noticed her arrival and smiled. "Aunty, are you okay?"Zabzaya asked. Her aunt looked completely different. Her head was bandaged. "I'm fine, dear,"she said in a calm voice. Tears began to run down Zabzaya's face. "What happened aunty?" she asked impatiently. "Well dear, if you must know, I was hit by a speeding car,"she replied. She glared at her. She looked at me with sad eyes. "Listen,everybody,"she said, referring to the other family members in the room,"I need to speak to Zabzaya alone."                                       The others left the room and Zabzaya moved closer to the bed."Yes aunty?"she asked. Her aunt looked at her. "Look, dear. There's something that I must tell you. You're seventeen now, so I'm sure you can handle it. You know that your mother had a problem, right?"she asked,"Well, you must understand that it wasn't her fault. She broke down due to the burden she had to carry on her shoulders. She actually loved you very much, She was just overburdened." Zabzaya listened intently. Her aunt continued,"Well, that burden is what I'm about to explain to you. So listen carefully, my dear. Your mother had a very special gift, and because of this gift, she was made the queen of this realm known as Tarmeaya. She held the Arneocle within her. The Arneocle, deary, is a special type of spirit which grants the user immense powers, The Arneocle, however, was wanted by every citizen of Tarmeaya, and could not be used by regular individuals, It is special and could only be used by your mother. The problem with this, is that your mother had to become the authority figure for Tarmeaya, usng her powers as source of stability. You may think that becoming Queen must be a very exciting and easy way of life. This is not the case for your mother. She had no rest knowing that she had to protect the Arneocle. Most people within Tarmeaya thought that it was simply a rock or an object that coud be taken and would grant powers to anyone.They were oh so wrong. The Arneocle is a part of your mother. People within the land would constantly harass her and her whole castle. The people insisted that the power could be used in a better way, and that your mother was being selfish, She tried everything to try and calm the people. If she had told them the truth, however, she would be in grave danger. One must simply kill the holder of the Arneocle in order to gain it's special power."                                                                                                                                                "Now, here is the point as to why I am telling you this,"she continued," and why I am telling you this now. As you know, your mother and I have a very special connection. A somewhat unearhtly connection, involving our emotions and our physical states. As you cans see, I am not well, and I am in on the verge of dying. Your mother, therefore, is in the same condition as me. She needs your help dear. Your mother is in Tarmeaya now. She is still queen over her people, but she is dying, just as I am. If she dies, the Arneocle can be taken by a sorceror and implanted into whomever he pleases. You must stop that from happening. You are the only one who can use the Arneocle properly, and safely. If someone else gets to it, they may wreak havoc, as it will become unstable and destroy the land. Your mother gave me precise instructions and told me that if anything were to happen to me, I should give you this information immediately. You don't have much time. Say your goodbyes to take the Arneocle from your mother, Remember, when I die, so does your mother."                     Zabzaya looked at her with disbelief, "But,"she began,"If I'm to inherit the Arneocle, why didn't she give it to me long ago?" she asked. Her aunt looked at her."That's simple darling, you were too young. Your mother wanted to bear this burden for as long as she could, She didn't want this to pass on to you too quickly. You are now resonsible and much older, and I'm sure you'll be able to handle the problems that come with this gift." Zendaya glared at her and raised her eyebrows, She seemed a bit shocked, and still a bit confused."Don't worry dear,"her aunt started,"Your mother knows you can handle this power. But like I said, you must hurry. In order to get to Tarmeaya, you must find a clearing, A large field or some sort of clearing where you can jump the dimension loop. This is a loop that connects all the different dimensions within this universe. Now listen carefully. When you find a large enough clearing, you must weave a few signs with your hands. If done in the correct order, and in the right rhythm, you will enter a dimension plane. You must walk across and go to the correct door. If you go through the wrong door, there's no telling where you'll go. Now look carefully." Her aunt showed her a pattern of hand signals and movements that seemed too fast to be humanly possible, Her aunt then slowed down the movements and showed her each sign one by one. Zabzaya soon learned the pattern .                                                                                                                     "Okay dear,"she began," When you jump the dimension plane, find the 18th door on the right. Use this door, and you will enter Tarmeaya. Make sure to hurry dear. Pack some belongings,as the door leads to a long and open desert in Tarmeaya. There's no telling how long it will take you to find the palace. Unfortunately, I do not have any directions for you. Just follow your heart, and it should lead you there." Zabzaya seemed overwhelmed. She nodded. "Okay aunty, I know what I must do,"she said. She was about to exit when her aunt called her back."And darling, one more thing,"she said,"If you get to Tarmeaya and you don't find the castle quickly, you may run into some unfriendly creatures. Tarmeaya is not simply a town or village. It is a whole world, filled with different creatures and animals. Some may be friendly. But hear my words child. Do not let any of them lead you astray. Always remember why you went there, and what your purpose is. For many within Tarmeaya know of your coming. For they have heard of the Queen's ailment. If you happen to run into humans on the way to the castle, that means you are close. Humans live near and around the castle. But remember, do not let your heart be taken a fool and you be led astray.Always follow your heart, and remember your mother. Goodbye child. Go now and do what you must." With that, Zabzaya left to follow her uncertain destiny.