by @RelatedAriana
Rate: 8.5
Okay so first off, that cover is fucking awesome looking man. Like holy shit, good job @smirks. Obviously a good cover gets people interested.
One thing that bothered me was that you used "Your" instead of "you're." Don't worry I do this myself so I understand how hard it is to catch sometimes when you do it!
You also have some tense issues. In chapter two at the beginning it should be "I wish I could run..." because you already started the chapter in past tense.
This book also reminds me a little of a book called "Bella" by @xagoraphobiax.
The book seems really interesting, but at the same time you're writing a type of book that has been done before, and I've already read physco books.
Hope this helps!
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Pants Off Reviews
Spiritualyou can't take my pants off they are already off. but to enter this review book no pants are allowed if i see pants, they can only be @haroldspants
