My own creep story

The Twisted End

..... He was the scariest person since you started to escape. He looks totally wild, he's eyes, well they were empty. No soul!
    He stood about 6'10" and he was solid. I'd never wish this crazy man on my worst enemy.
     You hear him making so much noise . You pull her along. When you've got around another corner, you hear an explosion of splintering of the door.
    "Oh shit. You must run faster!" You yelled not letting go of her.
   You open a door not caring if someone's in there. As you shut the door, terrifying screams of the men that are being torn apart by the massive, psychotic man.
    You shut the lights off and crouch in the corner of the small closet.
    Keeping very quiet so you can hear. All you're hearing is automatic guns and all of frightening screams.
      You pull a small flashlight out of your pocket. You ask for the map and she hands it to you.
     You open it very quietly. You think shit, you don't know where exactly on the map where you are. She looks and points to the words on doors.
    "Nice job. There's the evil mans room, that means we're closer then I thought to getting out of here."
    Just then the screaming stops. You both look at each other wearing the same expression, mortified.
     You hold up your hand to let her know to stay. You quietly go to the door and put your ear against it.
There is nothing, it's completely quiet. You slowly open the door to peek out. Nothing, it's an empty hall.
     You grab her by the arm, and run fast.
Only a few more doors and we're free.

     You hear loud and fast feet hitting the floor. It's getting closer. As you run, you're checking every door. Finally you find one and pull the girl in with and start blocking the door with the desk and a chair under the handle of the door.
     Grabbing your friend and hide in the closet.  You hear the big steps and loud banging on doors.
   Now he's outside your door. You prey he doesn't get in. You hear the door  start to splinter.
     You know this is the end for the both of you!?...