Kidnapped by a vampire prince (ON HOLD)

New start

I am rewriting this book because I have been asked by many to do so. Please please let me know what you think

Eva's pov
I sigh and look down at my stained pants and busted shoes as I take a deep breath and clock into my second job working Blood Struck a new club that I had the privilege to get a job at. I don't like it much but it helps pay for what I need to pay for and plus a t gives me sometime out of the house that is not even a home. A home is were love is held and shared but this is not like that. The only thing my home stores is empty beer bottles and angry hateful parents. But now that I am eighteen I can make my own life and money and maybe find something to live for even though I am very doubtful right this second. So lost in my mind I don't even pay attention to where I am going and run right into a wall. I look up and see the most beautiful blue eyes I have ever seen. And then a large hand. "Are you ok?" all I can do is stare at the man in front of me he towers over my five foot frame he has nice arms that are almost coming out of his black button down shirt and a strong jaw line with the most intense blue eyes that seem to see right through me and that shakes me to my very core almost to the point of not breathing. What is happening right now? Oh my lord am I drooling? I go to wipe my mouth and stop mid way. "Uh yeah I am fine I am so sorry for running into you I was just trying to get my apron on and you see I just got l...." He held his hand up making me stop mid sentence. "It's fine don't apologize." Just like that the man walks away. All I can do is stare at his back and wonder why I feel this extreme sense of longing in my chest. It hurts and is an odd feeling but I brush it off I have work to do. I start to make my rounds cleaning and taking orders for people and before I know it I am taking that apron off put on my old tattered coat and clocking out for the night Orwell should I say morning. I snicker at my own silly though and brace myself for the dark cold lonely streets I am about to face. I don't like walking at night especially alone I always feel as though I am being watched. I turn and look all around but once again just like every other night I see nothing absolutely nothing but feel there eyes all at once. Just like a I feel the wind ripping through my so called coat. Suddenly the unseen eyes become hands that grip my hair and yank my head back. I feel a nose on my neck "You smell so sweet my angel I have looked for you a long long time I have watched you for what felt like years." I tense up at the same deep dark voices earlier on today I know deep down its the man from earlier. I try to fight to get away I try to scream but I can't it is almost like I am not in control of my actions I am not in control of everything I fight to stay in control I fight to stay up on my feet and fight. But my legs buck from underneath me and all I feel is big strong arms wrapped around my small frame. All I smell is him and all I hear is the distant sound of his voice until I am consumed by darkness.

I finally restarted it omg yay! Let me know what you think! I really need the support to do this I love to write but I like making others happy way more 😍😊